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Warm Memories

Memories have lived long after our spring. Warm thoughts of your smile glide with an ease. Like sunlight swaying on our empty swing, your sweet laughter floats on every breeze. Warm thoughts of your smile glide with an ease. I long for feelings only young love brings. Your sweet laughter floats on every breeze, our tender soundtrack of youth softly sings. I long for feelings only young love brings like sunlight swaying on our empty swing. Our tender soundtrack of youth softly sings. Memories have lived long after our spring.
Written 6/17/20 Contest – Feelings of Nostalgia Sponsor – Eve Roper Photo #1

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Date: 6/21/2020 1:40:00 PM
Hello Rhonda, A most excellent pantoum!! This particular style of poetry can be challenging to do, and you've executed it magnificently. The tone and tenor of "Warm Memories" are perfect, and the verses are beautifully done. Great Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 7:54:00 PM
Hi, Gary. Thanks for the kind visit! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/21/2020 9:45:00 AM
A beautiful pantoum, touching and tender, your pantoum flows so naturally and charmingly. All the best my friend, Blessings, Jennifer.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 7:53:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/21/2020 8:03:00 AM
This is such a pretty piece. I feel happy reading it. ;0)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 7:52:00 PM
Thanks, Rick! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/19/2020 11:28:00 AM
Memories certainly live on...I like this one too
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 7:52:00 PM
Thanks, Arturo! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/18/2020 8:49:00 PM
'like sunlight swaying on our empty swing' -- sigh! So tender, so poignant. Lovely imaged and penned, Rhonda. A winner for sure! Smiles, Gershon
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/30/2020 7:51:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/18/2020 4:56:00 PM
Lovely gentle flow, just like the swings of childhood, best wishes for the contest, Rhonda-
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 6:26:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle! Very kind of you. Love and Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 6:26:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle! Very kind of you. Love and Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/18/2020 7:20:00 AM
Enjoyed tone and flow of your poem, Rhonda, longingly dwelling in memories. Sweet reflections!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 6:25:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay! Your kind comments are more than appreciated. Blessings to you, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/18/2020 6:00:00 AM
Your words paint a beautiful nostalgia of young love dear Rhonda. Blessings and love to you :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 6:24:00 PM
Thank you, Aditi! Blessings and love sent to you, Rhonda xx

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