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War and Peace

those weary eyes looked at me red, filthy but beautiful to see between the ground of battle which last and will go on forever until all breathe their last covered with blood, sorrow and sweat they were wondering how much longer this land of mine see them suffer so many people were killed and many others fighting their way to join them it seemed to last forever never ending it felt i pass the yesterday smile filled faces which covered in anguish which didn't help in making my heart peace the day came and it all ended no one left to share the win or lose in the end it seemed in vain killing their own brothers and fathers but there was nothing to gain i passed the graves of everyone who cared and didn't too on it i shed a tear and placed a lily to every brave heart which lost its soul for the sake of a friend or their family

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Date: 5/29/2011 12:35:00 AM
This is indeed a very powerful write nive ! You are a talented person . I loved reading your poems .
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