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Walls 2

In my nightmares. I see you sitting there. Sitting alone at rivers edge. I'm almost positive that you're dead. Because you don't move inside my head. Roses forming where thorns once fell. He who desires but does not receive. Conform to keep you inside prison walls. Reality seeks fantasy in motionless stalls. As prisoners keep their concubines tied up in knots. Thursday 5:30 pm 3/6/2014

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Date: 1/29/2015 1:42:00 AM
damn walls anyways and those that try to put them up. may your spirit always be free
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Date: 1/19/2015 12:51:00 AM
wants n needs are blocked with weeds, as another comes to show, open doors till yes indeed, the right one you do know...
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Date: 6/26/2014 2:30:00 AM
Bravo, well done.
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Date: 6/9/2014 12:19:00 AM
lovely poem great imagination energy and all thats left to lifer serving his time....imagination is better than fine
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Date: 4/26/2014 9:36:00 PM
Loved this one, great write!
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Date: 4/19/2014 10:46:00 AM
Sounds like this poem is about confinement and unfulfilled thoughts and desires. Nicely done. Thanks for your comments Deb. I have been sick with a flu that turned into pneumonia so have been sick a month now. Just got onto another batch of antibiotics to try and clear it up. Thank you for thinking of me and asking. love phyl Happy Easter to you and your family.
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Date: 4/16/2014 3:45:00 PM
a very interesting and profound one for symbolizing confinements, Debbie. I enjoyed seeing this newer post of yours today.
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Date: 3/30/2014 2:32:00 PM
Hi Debbie. I like Walls--nice imagery! I sense there's a little passion brewing there. Bet it's an interesting story. Thanks for the poems ;-) Mel
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Date: 3/30/2014 6:19:00 AM
- A very well written poem dear Debbie! - But ... I wish you nice and sweet dreams .... away with nightmares. - I hope spring comes to you soon - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/28/2014 12:12:00 PM
Unfulfilled hopes and desires...but we can not become their slaves. // paul
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Date: 3/16/2014 8:09:00 PM
Hello Debbie...another haunting beauty...I'm hoping and praying your dreams turn happy soon and you get the things you want...your friend Donna
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Date: 3/11/2014 11:43:00 PM
Hello again! I haven't seen you here in quite a while! It's good to see one of your works posted here.
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Date: 3/11/2014 11:42:00 PM
Mystic androsensic spin of entangled webs. Keep em' coming. Peace. :)
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