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WALKING AWAY HEALED ME I wanted truth, you told me lies, you love me but you agonize. Now, I am glad you acting mild for I and her have reconciled. I walked away with troubled breast but within, echoes, I am blessed. The fallen tears dried soon, I smiled for I and her have reconciled. Your shouts, your doubts: they made me strong! You are unaware, I reviled but this I don't like as swan song for I and her have reconciled. Gone are the days, you crushed my dreams, I strive. I thrive. I became wild but I am here, crowned with soft beams for I and her have reconciled. With a face healed from pains and fears, a warrior but still a child, I cry quiet, my loudest tear for I and her have reconciled. __________________________________________________________ ***Kyrielle - rhyming couplets or quatrains with a refrain repeated in the last line 7:08 pm, December 14, 2015

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Date: 12/20/2015 6:58:00 PM
Olive, stopped by to enjoy some of my favorite and best poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 12/17/2015 3:22:00 PM
Olive, Congrats on your win. SKAT
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Date: 12/16/2015 6:21:00 PM
Nicely done, Olive. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/16/2015 5:44:00 PM
Congrats Olive on a fine win with this great write that had to come from a true heart!
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Date: 12/16/2015 5:20:00 PM
Greetings Olive. Congrats on your deep verses' WIN in the "Walking Away" contest! ;-)
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Date: 12/16/2015 12:54:00 PM
Powerful and emotional, and very sad, with the light at the end of the tunnel reached. Big smiles on this one being graced with it's placing ~~ hugs//James ~~ xx
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Date: 12/16/2015 10:28:00 AM
Heartfelt write Olive congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 12/15/2015 7:26:00 PM
Just lovely Olive & very STRONG. Happy Holy Days! [Put an L in the title little one ;) unless you wanted it WAKING?] Light & Love
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/15/2015 11:52:00 PM
Debbie, thanks much, careless me that I almost forgot to include the letter L.. =`) and yes I do want to convey this poem in strong terms.. =`) hugs!!!!! Yes love your light and love.. =`)
Date: 12/15/2015 10:01:00 AM
Both the form and the topic have been tackled well. I still have to write a Kyrielle, but first I need to check if meter is necessary. [I walked away with (a) troubled breast]...and the healing began! Hugs // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/15/2015 8:28:00 PM
The definition I gave here is a gyst from what I read here in Soup, I really didn't bother to read more regarding it, however I stick to same syllable count for me to get the tone I desire.. I also want to emphasize each word hence such...=`) first time, I saw the theme I knew what will I write.. =`) hugs~Olive ELoisa

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