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In a world of social media our lives are being guided and controlled by market forces, in a way the human mind has become a prisoner. Our attention the greatest commodity. We feel mildly connected or are we really unable to form long-lasting & meaningful relationships anymore? ---
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Walk with Me I made my way Through the darkened streets Past the hungry hearts Where the enemy eats I browsed through glass At my dear old friends Where their silent smiles Replace love that mends And I somehow feel Like I'm missing out Like there's something wrong Like I want to shout Your lips don't move But I see your thoughts Like you are crying out For a hug, of sorts We need hands to hold We need hugs to give Take the red pill now While there's time to live.. And I wonder how It has come to this We have each replaced True connection bliss With a pocket world That controls us all.. Making us feel large While we shrink to small So my prayer is this; Stop us going under. Wake our hearts, dear Lord, From this walking slumber. Jinjagoliath 11th March 2022

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Date: 1/11/2023 1:35:00 PM
Such a great piece Christopher with such good imagery and insightfulness. I'm pleased to see you're a believer in Christ just like me, amen indeed! Blessings always, Gordon
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