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Wake Up, My Heart

Wake up, my heart! The morning sky Has donned his pastel gown; The air is crisp, and swallows fly High over field and town. Wake up, my heart, and sing a song. The day is fresh and bright And waits to carry you along And let your soul take flight. Wake up, my heart, with joy! Explore The wondrous world. Embrace Life’s possibilities, and soar High on the spirit’s grace. 10/18/2017

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Date: 9/17/2018 1:28:00 PM
Lovely, Agnes. Congrats.
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Date: 11/7/2017 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Agnes - nicely done, my friend - this is beautiful! :-)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 11/7/2017 6:10:00 AM
Thank you, Gregory.
Date: 11/6/2017 11:54:00 PM
Congratulations, Agnes on your win.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 11/7/2017 6:10:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal.
Date: 11/6/2017 11:45:00 PM
and another win. Awesome, Agnes. (recheck line 3, I think a typo there)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 11/7/2017 6:10:00 AM
oops, that *was* a typo. Thanks for pointing this out; it's fixed now.
Date: 11/6/2017 8:02:00 PM
Well done, Agnes, congratulate again on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 11/7/2017 6:09:00 AM
Thanks, Eve.
Date: 10/29/2017 8:21:00 PM
A very happy poem that makes me smile. I love the meter, it flows so nicely.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 11/7/2017 6:09:00 AM
Thank you, Becca.
Date: 10/26/2017 4:26:00 PM
Beautiful, uplifting and melodious. Just what a sleeping heart needs! Love the technical side of the poem, too, Agnes. Regards // paul
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/26/2017 8:50:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Paul.
Date: 10/26/2017 10:13:00 AM
Beautifully expressed Agnes. Best of luck in the contest! : )
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/17/2017 6:28:00 PM
I just looked it up and saw that you were awarded an HM. I would have had it much higher, but we are all individuals with different tastes. Congratulations!
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/26/2017 8:50:00 PM
Thank you, Connie. Contest has already been judged :)
Date: 10/26/2017 1:06:00 AM
Knock Knock on that heart! Where is the next poem! :) :)
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Date: 10/25/2017 7:38:00 PM
I see it is a winner, Agnes. Big congrats for this beauty. (hmmm, maybe I already knew you won this. Wish I had a better memory!!)
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Date: 10/21/2017 7:11:00 PM
I love this poem Agnes, my kind of poetry :)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/26/2017 7:09:00 AM
Thank you, Gary
Date: 10/21/2017 6:50:00 PM
Agnes, congratulations on your win well done.. :) Hugs Eve ~`*
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/26/2017 7:09:00 AM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 10/20/2017 7:22:00 PM
Great flow, enjambment and imagery. My kind of poetry!!! Love it, Agnes.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/26/2017 7:09:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Do you want to guess when I wrote this? While proctoring two physics exams, LOL.
Date: 10/19/2017 10:57:00 AM
Great attitude, great write Agnes, congratulations...
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/26/2017 7:08:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie.
Date: 10/19/2017 7:40:00 AM
Wow! I found myself singing along, nice rhythm in this quatrain, Agnes:)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/26/2017 7:08:00 AM
Thank you, Jo - I felt a tune when I wrote this, too.
Date: 10/18/2017 10:07:00 PM
So very uplifting, great write!
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/26/2017 7:07:00 AM
Thank you, Arthur.