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arise with softness dawns instinctual rebirth creation imbibes

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/5/2019 2:55:00 PM

Hello Charlie Smith, this is a well written poem. i have enjoyed it. It is uplifting. have a nice day my friend.

Charlie Smith
Date: 2/7/2019 11:07:00 AM

Thank you Darlene...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/21/2018 6:22:00 PM

Ahhhh, inspiring haiku Charlie! : )

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/23/2018 11:23:00 AM

Thank you Connie...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/18/2018 3:35:00 PM

This picture perfect poem paints the elixir of life beautifully, Charlie. Lovely write. Love and joy always.

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/18/2018 3:40:00 PM

Thank you Freddie...

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/17/2018 8:33:00 PM

Brilliant haiku. Enjoyed.

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/18/2018 10:46:00 AM

Thank you Susan...

Wendy Nipas

Date: 7/11/2018 2:52:00 PM

Nicely done. Beautifully expressed. So true. The order and reliability of nature truly is something magical. Thank you.

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/12/2018 9:48:00 AM

Thanks Wendy...

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/10/2018 10:05:00 PM

A Hi-IQ Haiku, Mr. Smith!! … And to think that I was expecting Finnegan's Wake when I saw the title! ~ Gershon

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/11/2018 9:43:00 AM

Hope you weren't too disappointed, thanks Gershon...

Fj Thomas

Date: 7/10/2018 2:07:00 PM

Stiil creating entire paintings with only few words I see :) This is soft and beautiful Charlie.

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/11/2018 9:38:00 AM

Thank you FJ...

Warren Doll

Date: 7/10/2018 10:10:00 AM

Wonderful haiku, Charlie.

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/10/2018 11:04:00 AM

Thank You Warren...

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/8/2018 7:50:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned my friend. Thanks for sharing it.

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/8/2018 11:19:00 AM

Thank you Ravi...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/6/2018 2:49:00 AM

graceful show of morning's rebirth... ohh so fine, charlie...huggs

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/7/2018 12:25:00 PM

Thank you Nette...

Paul Callus

Date: 7/6/2018 1:55:00 AM

Waking up to soothing words like these is a guarantee of a lovely and peaceful day ahead, Charlie. Best regards // paul

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/7/2018 12:23:00 PM

Thank you Paul...

Lyric Man

Date: 7/6/2018 12:46:00 AM

Really nice Haiku, Charlie!

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/7/2018 12:19:00 PM

Thank you L Man...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/5/2018 4:30:00 PM

Great haiku Charlie!

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/7/2018 12:08:00 PM

Thank you Vijay...

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/5/2018 1:17:00 PM

Very nice, Charlie :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/6/2018 11:16:00 AM

Thanks Heidi...

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/5/2018 1:06:00 PM

A lovely way to awake... Nice haiku... All the best charlie

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/6/2018 11:09:00 AM

Thank you Arturo...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/5/2018 12:57:00 PM

- Beautiful written, Charlie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/6/2018 11:08:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise...