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Waiting For Snow

The snow laden sky hangs heavy, as if bowing under a burden of unconfessed sins it cannot discharge. Pregnant clouds drag their swollen bellies over fallow fields that lie waiting for absolution.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 3/6/2020 8:16:00 PM
Awesome imagery, Agnes.
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Date: 1/19/2020 12:57:00 PM
Fantastic writing, Agnes. Not sure which contest you won in, but it was well deserved.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/20/2020 8:34:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. It's one of Brian's.
Date: 1/18/2020 11:01:00 PM
This really quite lovely and visual! Love the image of clouds being pregnant. Congratulations.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/20/2020 8:35:00 AM
Thank you, Sam
Date: 1/18/2020 2:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!;)
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Date: 1/17/2020 8:47:00 AM
Fall the rains of absolution...strong vibes here
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