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Vulnerable began as a free verse or rhyme but I was trying to educate myself of various forms of poetry. Here is the original poem...
The only flower blooms in a feild of withered weeds
The wind howls a strong,violent breeze
A single drop of water drips on the desert sand
So lost and alone, just like I am
new life exposed to below zero
A snowflake falling through sun beams
In this place that is so cold
The last leaf on winters bare trees
*I am exposed,like I have no skin
I've just been born,I am naked again
A thousand eyes behold,there's nothing they cannot see
Nowhere to hide in this vast,stormy sea
You've torn down my only refuge
Stolen all of my pride
Given every hand a stone,they sling with their eyes
And now,here I stand
Since you left me alone
Since you left me alone
With who I am*