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Voices

you talk to me. and i try to hear. your words would know me if my mind did not resist. what do you expect? that we should conflict? that we should connect? or merely titillate? except we are from different worlds; or rather you are from a world and i am from no world at all but the interstices of many. my mind can not organize for you to define in your cosmopolitan ways. so how am i to speak for you to see me? or should i ignore you and recluse? yet i crave you and the presence of speech other than my own to drive away the madness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/8/2014 3:01:00 PM
Hah.. ah, Love IT!!!! From a male perspective that is... You write boldly and I respect that so much here at the soup. Bye for now, Cindy
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Sam Toil
Date: 5/8/2014 3:26:00 PM
My dear Cindy, thank you so much for your warm comment. As we have communicated several times, I crave to see your face;) Please post it to your avatar so that I might relish in its beauty. Hugs;) Sam
Date: 5/7/2014 11:19:00 PM
Hi Sam, Love it!!! I don't know about you, but I enjoy the voices, no need to drive away the madness. the impression, of this poem is mind blowing... enjoyed... Linda
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Sam Toil
Date: 5/8/2014 6:09:00 AM
Hi dearest Linda! Thanks ever so for dropping by with your kind comment. I just checked your page and I see you have posted a new poem! Does this mean your writer's block is gone? I sure hope so. Today is my "writing" day. So tomorrow (my "reading" day) I promise to check it out first thing. BTW, I love your new avatar! I didn't think you would be able to top the old one, but you did! Luv & Hugs;) Ben
Date: 5/7/2014 12:03:00 PM
- Sam, meet the spring with a clean sheet .... throw the demons out of the door - very well written ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/7/2014 12:09:00 PM
Thank you dear Anne-Lise for your lovely comment and for your kindly advice. Yes it is Spring and a lovely day here. Sunny, not to hot, not to cold. It is the kind of day we live for. But I have much writing to do. And many demons to slay. I shall spend a few moments appreciating the beauty of this exceptional day, thanks to your advice. But write, I must. Thanks for stopping by. Hugs;) Sam
Date: 5/6/2014 9:22:00 AM
SAM I Think I know about that madness you are TALKING ABOUT..LOL .. good morning dear friend.. I love your poetry.. always love it. Brooke
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Date: 5/6/2014 8:11:00 AM
Very good. :) I enjoyed this very much.
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Date: 5/6/2014 8:04:00 AM
Hi Sam, Once again your writes are so interesting and wonderful! Loved it. Thanks Sam, for sharing your writes with us here. Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/6/2014 7:18:00 AM
Interesting work that you have penned today..Good to read your work today..Sara
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