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Visiting Mother's Grave

The words of a poem, like the notes of a song, often fall flat, or off key. Today, words reached toward clouds, floated on soft winds with haunting notes. The sad of honest pain tore my heart, sang of death, beneath earth’s hard crust. Yet, I saw her eyes crinkle with laughter, then felt her hand rest on my arm. The time is near. She’ll be waiting, with arms spread wide, to welcome me home.

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Date: 3/30/2016 5:53:00 PM
A pleasure to read your verse this evening. Light & Love
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Cona Adams
Date: 4/3/2016 6:46:00 AM
Thank you, Debbie. Happy to have your visit. April has arrived, and Spring is in full swing. All the best to you.
Date: 3/10/2016 12:27:00 AM
a heartfelt poem... nice to read. LINDA
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Cona Adams
Date: 3/10/2016 7:20:00 AM
Thanks, Linda, for the visit to read. One of the nicest things about PoetrySoup is the ability to connect with other poets. Blessings.
Date: 2/28/2016 5:07:00 PM
So heart-felt, dear Cona. Elaine
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Cona Adams
Date: 3/10/2016 7:18:00 AM
Thanks, Elaine for the visit. Always happy to hear from you. Blessings.
Date: 2/22/2016 3:58:00 PM
Cona, this poem is wrapprd with love and so moving. It provokes thoughts of their own reuniting in the readers mind. Beautiful! #7 Blessings, Connie
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Cona Adams
Date: 2/22/2016 5:35:00 PM
So grateful to you, Connie, for the visit, and for taking the time to read. You are more than generous. All the best to you!
Date: 2/22/2016 11:24:00 AM
Some might call the experience paranormal. but the blessing is universal and stems from love. I love this poem. And thanks for reading my stuff. daver
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Cona Adams
Date: 2/22/2016 11:47:00 AM
Thank you, Daver, for your generous comment, and thanks for reading. A visit is always welcome. Blessings.
Date: 2/7/2016 1:08:00 AM
"The words of a poem, like the notes of a song, often fall flat, or off key." Very true, especially at those moments when we try to capture our loss in words on the passing of a loved one. "Yet, I saw her eyes crinkle with laughter, then felt her hand rest on my arm." Death would not be so painful if this vision you express could float across the chasm that separates us from the departed. Touching poem!
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Cona Adams
Date: 2/7/2016 1:55:00 PM
Thank you, Agona Apell, for the visit to read. Always appreciated. I have written many poems about Mother. She was an exceptional person, and as long as I am alive, she lives on in memory. Our treasured memories are the balm which soothes our grief. Blessings.
Date: 2/1/2016 2:27:00 PM
Heartfelt poem my lovely friend. Mother is mother, so lovely always, my lovely friend,bl
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Cona Adams
Date: 2/1/2016 4:16:00 PM
Thanks for the visit to read, BL. All the best to you.
Date: 2/1/2016 9:16:00 AM
Beautiful words in a melancholy vein...
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Cona Adams
Date: 2/1/2016 10:50:00 AM
Thank you, Probir, for the visit, and the generous comment. Blessings to you.
Date: 1/31/2016 7:56:00 AM
Hi Cona. A very heartfelt poem that truly touched my heart. My mother passed on a few years ago and I still think of her daily. Thanks so much for sharing..... Robert.
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Cona Adams
Date: 2/1/2016 9:10:00 AM
Thanks to you, Robert, for the visit to read. And for taking the time to leave a comment. Blessings.
Date: 1/28/2016 4:06:00 PM
Cona - Thank you!, for sharing......hang on!!!!, to that hope!!! in dark and hard times. 'Eyes crinkle with laughter and felt her hand rest - inspired!, with that truth!!, very!!, special, and very! special given....God sent......yes indeed!!!!!, she will!!!!!, be waiting for you to welcome you home. Kim x
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Cona Adams
Date: 1/28/2016 4:50:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. Enjoyed your enthusiastic response. Blessings to you.
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Kim Difford
Date: 1/28/2016 4:08:00 PM
God will!!!!, underpin you Cona,under everything. Kim x
Date: 1/28/2016 4:04:00 PM
I'm sure she'll be looking down waiting for the day you join her Cona - your uplifting words brought a huge lump to my throat:-) hugs jan xx
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Cona Adams
Date: 1/28/2016 4:51:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. Your visits are always welcome. All the best.

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