Venturous Microcosm

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ finite mind taps into infinite realms; neurons spark ignites the engine and a venturous microcosm is born

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Silent One

Date: 5/2/2024 10:12:00 AM

Such an intelligent selection of words.. nicely done dear Sara..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/2/2024 4:49:00 PM

Wow, thank you for that comment! Appreciate you sharing your thoughts...have a pleasant evening, Sara

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/2/2024 2:41:00 AM

Splendid concise description of the birth of a microcosm.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/2/2024 4:29:00 AM

thanks so much, Victor. Your visit and remarks are much appreciated. Enjoy your day, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 5/1/2024 11:14:00 PM

Oh this is unique and deep! I love it. Your wordplay here and also how it flows. How neurons sparks and ignited and microcosms are born, i was always into science in school so loved reading this dear sara. Sending you light always

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/2/2024 4:29:00 AM

thank you, Ink! I'm grateful for your kind words this morning. I wasn't much of a science person in school, but now I find it fascinating...it seems spiritual to me. enjoy your day, hugs, Sara