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Velvet Wails

When your intent looms to impale, I soon forget how to inhale. When my impassioned mouth is caught by your desirous lips as sought, and your flesh-kisses press lust trails rendering me as velvet wails ... oh, then ... you perfectly astound as I melt perfectly unbound. ... CayCay March 1, 2020 excerpt from original poem: Unbound

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James Inman

Date: 5/16/2020 3:01:00 PM

This is so passionate and stands as a beautiful poem in itself CayCay.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/24/2020 12:49:00 PM

This is wonderful CayCay! Congratulations on your high placement! xxoo

John Hamilton

Date: 4/21/2020 1:30:00 PM

This is a stunning write Cay Cay, no wonder it was chosen as a winner!

Caycay Jennings
Date: 4/21/2020 4:53:00 PM

Thank you so much, John. It was inspired by My Tim, my greatest blessing and my sexy dude. May I suggest you read the entire poem, 'Unbound' since you enjoyed this excerpt so much? I love your visits and look forward to visiting you soon - I'm being sincere, I always enjoy reading you. STAY WELL! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2020 10:41:00 AM

Back to see this sensuous poem of yours again. I loved it then and I love it now. Congrats on your win, darlin'

John Watt

Date: 4/18/2020 8:42:00 AM

CayCay, gorgeous in its sensuous description of intimacy and surrender. Well-deserved podium placement today, friend!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 4/18/2020 8:24:00 AM

This is exquisite, CayCay - you NEVER disappoint, Dear Poet, and this is no exception ... sensual and beautiful, with fresh phrasing and intelligent word choice - love it! Congrats on your 3rd place, my friend! :o) <3

Caycay Jennings
Date: 4/20/2020 3:40:00 PM

Thank you, Gregory, for your kind words, and thank you for sharing yourself with Soupers via contests you sponsor and all else - your presence is a joyous one. Stay well and be blessed ... CayCay

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/17/2020 11:38:00 PM

This WILL be on Greg's winner's list my friend. It is exceptional! xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2020 4:55:00 PM

jUst thought I would stop by and say how I miss you, Caycay. I hope things are going well for you. Hugs!!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/11/2020 10:30:00 AM

Sensuous and passionate write dear CayCay. I love it! Your heart is pure love that is why you write about love so exquisitely 'And your flesh kisses press lust trails rendering me as velvet wails' I am totally enthralled with your poem Blessings and good luck. Jennifer.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/6/2020 7:13:00 PM

Someone is in honey of love.. beautiful write.. sweet lady... good luck in the contest. Hugs eve

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/6/2020 5:49:00 PM

worth a second read.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/6/2020 4:38:00 PM

This is tantalizing, so evocative, the rhyming very effective, I think this should do well in the contest!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2020 3:17:00 PM

wow, such a sensuous one, Caycay. LOVE it. Especially the velvet part!!

Paul Callus

Date: 3/4/2020 1:05:00 PM

Sensual and passionate, to say the least, CayCay! The internal rhyme is also worthy of note. I will go back to reread the full version of "Unbound". ~ Regards & Hugs // paul

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/2/2020 6:07:00 PM

Symmetrically smooth as -- velvet! Two thumbs way up, CayCay! :) Gershon

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/1/2020 10:08:00 PM

This one is hot. It looks like we both have similar thoughts on our minds. Ooh la la Cay Cay.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/1/2020 10:02:00 PM

Someone has fallen in love... this is a wow!! I love that second line. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve