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whate'er the sun hunts up the sky is meant, as lace to grace the eye in dazzled dreams that dance a-sea and weep that fills the rills and leas for what light paints in day's dear death can gift one’s gaze yet steal the breath as eve’s dark bloom thus burgeons, ours - sweet butt’ry moons … and silvered stars. ( for the “No 1256 New Poem Only” Poetry Contest, Brian strand, Judge/Sponsor )

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Date: 12/7/2023 7:08:00 PM
You know I like magnificence in brevity - this, truly no exception on so many levels.
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Date: 11/8/2023 7:28:00 PM
Always a great read, Greg. This is true poetry (IMHO)Good luck! Reads like a winner. I hope life has been treating you well old friend:)
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