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"To vanish and not be heard from ever again is mystery not to you, but to those who love you, a nightmare will ensue." By Poet What becomes of those who vanish, quickly slipping out of sight becoming ghosts so greatly missed who step not back into the light. You hear of souls like these sometimes. They simply walk out of a door, around a corner, down some street . . to not be heard from any more. It’s likely they’ve been kidnapped though how awful if no proof is found to show that there had been foul play. Were they killed or gagged and bound? Had there been horrific torture? What must those who love them feel if their body’s not recovered? To have no clue must be surreal. And always there’s that tiny chance to which their friends or kin may cling. They simply disappeared because of secrets or deep suffering. Are they now in slavery to traffickers of sex somewhere? This thought must haunt the parents of young kids with faces sweet and fair. How hard it is has to be to know your loved one had no cause to flee. In hell you’d suffer thinking that in hell your loved one still might be.

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Date: 4/7/2024 2:44:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest with this exceptional poem, I like your quote too, hugs
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Date: 4/7/2024 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a sad/powerful write/quote. Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 4/7/2024 4:01:00 AM
You have taken Vanish as a brilliantly selected topic and a burning problem df Andrea. Very few writers care for such a grave problem everywhere in the world. . The way you have beautifully focused on the subject is brilliant and outstanding dear friend Andrea. I must say its a great poem. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/7/2024 9:54:00 AM
I thank you muchly!
Date: 4/3/2024 4:27:00 AM
This is so well expressed Andrea. It would be an unimaginable pain.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/3/2024 12:27:00 PM
thanks, Richard.
Date: 4/3/2024 4:07:00 AM
I watch some cases on TV crime shows and wonder who took those children, wives and mothers, teens or adults. Some get solved and others no one ever knows. I feel for all concerned within those mysteries. If only we could eliminate the elements of society that do such things, but alas, we don't have any control of that right now. Thanks for sharing this one on this topic. You have done a great job presenting the topic in poetic form. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara K
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/3/2024 12:26:00 PM
we can never eleminate it. It's just so hard to think of what they go through.
Date: 4/2/2024 5:31:00 PM
Such a lovely write Andrea. Some questions are not answered. We must give love to our loved ones and know when their silence is a dozen words so we can help. They fear being misinterpreted, judged or not understood so they flee. And even when they are taken, we do not know. We hope the heavens give strength to lost souls. The ones the clouds took and the ones humans did.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/2/2024 10:21:00 PM
Thanks so much,vTonye
Date: 4/2/2024 12:16:00 PM
As always … I love your rhymes …. So beautifully inked .
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/2/2024 1:15:00 PM
Thanks, sweetie
Date: 4/1/2024 10:54:00 PM
Whew! Damn... Your depictions are unsettling, even nightmarish, Andrea. I can only imagine the suffering the parents, and of course the children, would endure.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/2/2024 1:16:00 PM
thanks, Robert. I'll take that Damn!!
Date: 4/1/2024 7:46:00 PM
Wow! Quite a meditation. A sad reality of life, too often duplicated. I admire and feel for the men and women, law enforcement, who have to deal with such sad reality every day...and then go home to spouse and children~ try to leave it all outside.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/2/2024 1:18:00 PM
I watched a show just the other night called The Death Mask. It was about a cop who dwelt on an unsolved murder of an unknown 4 year old boy for over ten years. In doing this, he neglected his own daughter, just by obsessing over a boy he never knew. It was an old movie I found on Tubi. Really good one for contemplating the effects of such events on policemen.
Date: 4/1/2024 10:52:00 AM
Some things can knock you down, take the smile and light from your face. I think about these poor souls often. I hurt for them.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/2/2024 1:18:00 PM
for sure!
Date: 4/1/2024 8:48:00 AM
Great take on the contest..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/2/2024 1:18:00 PM
Thanks, S. O.
Date: 4/1/2024 6:54:00 AM
Hello Andrea,a deep, emotive poem. Unfortunately, this is our modern world.Well done Andrea.Have a blessed week.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/2/2024 1:18:00 PM
yes, so sad, Mulu. Thanks.
Date: 4/1/2024 4:02:00 AM
Andrea, you've taken on a heart-breaking subject with empathy and accuracy. Really very good how you emphasize the sadness of it all. My deceased brother-in-law was always hunting and my wife was fearful he would have an issue in the woods and not be heard from again. We are very lucky these days having all sorts of electronic tracking of people's phones. But that is a dual edged sword.
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Date: 4/1/2024 2:25:00 AM
A deep poem as we think about those dear and not so dear departed. Your poetry is always great. Hope you had a Happy Easter. Hugs. xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/2/2024 1:19:00 PM
thanks, and I hope you had a nice Easter as well.
Date: 3/31/2024 8:09:00 PM
Timely write, however horrific some may find it. Hostages are on my mind, and not just Israeli hostages, but Kenyan hostages, Ukrainian children taken by the dastardly Russians, and many more throughout the world. Kudos, Andrea. ~ Gershon
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/2/2024 1:19:00 PM
yes, hostages are everywhere, and I think the most horrific are sex slaves. Only 1 percent of them ever escape. That is the statistic I recently learned from a documentary and I was shocked by it.
Date: 3/31/2024 4:41:00 PM
Such a sad and horrifying reality -- a loved one vanishes without a trace; family and friends are left with no explanation, no closure...just the nagging of not knowing. (I think there was a TV show a few years ago titled 'Without a Trace') I loved the rhymes and the cadence of your words. Outstanding poem. Hope you had a wonderful Easter, Andrea. hugs and blessings, Sara
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/2/2024 1:15:00 PM
yes, I watched that show. I watch MANY shows about murder and abductions and stalking. these seem to be becoming way too common here in the USA. Thanks for your words about my poem.
Date: 3/31/2024 11:00:00 AM
Very profound and deep thoughts poem. Well penned.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/2/2024 1:15:00 PM
thanks, Jay.
Date: 3/31/2024 7:52:00 AM
Dear andrea, wow! I am speechless, what a profound and powerful poem this is, and your rhymes are excellent and theres a rhythmic cadence to your well articulated lines! For some reason i teared up as i read the last lines, the deep and soulful thinker in you can be felt and seen through this poem. Sad reality, we worry, as the world now is a cruel place: i must say this is a fave for me: and i cant help but just love that ending the most! I need to post for this contest still. Hah. Sent you some sun from email today to you. Sending more light always
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/31/2024 10:51:00 AM
Thanks so much, dear. This was inspired by our cat Simba going missing six days. It gives you a tiny taste of how parents must feel for missing kids.

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