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Vanilla Extraction

Soul is drawn to sky, no wind or wave interrupts heavens’ mirrored path. For “Vanilla Sky” contest

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Date: 11/25/2016 11:03:00 PM
nice lines.... congrats on being selected...
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Date: 5/1/2010 11:03:00 PM
I love this one. It should have won for sure!!
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Date: 4/25/2010 10:05:00 AM
very nice write good luck in the contest hope you are enjoying your weekend faleshia
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Date: 4/25/2010 9:46:00 AM
Oooh, I like this one a lot.
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Date: 4/25/2010 9:09:00 AM
Interesting use of imagery. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 4/25/2010 8:36:00 AM
Very inspirational, John, and I love the title! Great haiku. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/25/2010 8:33:00 AM
A nice haiku nicely expressed thoughts. Good luck
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Date: 4/25/2010 8:11:00 AM
Great Haiku that should do well in the contest..Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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