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Vampire

Vulgar pale appearance Viscount of blood sucking Vicious creature of night Vulture seeking its prey Venomous fangs hunger Victims heedless to threat Veins puncture on impact.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/12/2023 6:44:00 AM

This one sucks! Sorry I couldn’t resist.;0)

The Situation

Date: 10/2/2023 6:18:00 AM

Very discriptive.

Joseph May

Date: 9/27/2023 8:16:00 AM

Very nicely penned Lioness, Congrats on your win

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/26/2023 6:05:00 AM

wonderful writing... best wishes in the contest. God bless you with much love, Gina

Maria Williams

Date: 9/26/2023 3:57:00 AM

I love the take on your vampish poem. It's for a contest I see, good luck. I'm sure it'll score high, you've created it so well. Hugs

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 9/25/2023 5:34:00 AM

lol . I wonder where your inspiration came from . But true words .

Silent One

Date: 9/25/2023 4:11:00 AM

Ufff are you describing someone you know? I know its not real as there are no such things as vampires, but there some real toxic people in this world who drain energy, like narcissists who target the empath.. I work in a office where there was a toxic person, thankfully he has left now... I loved how you describe the vampire here and the use of the letter V, its is different to the others I have seen, which is good. All the best in the contest innit.

Silent One
Date: 9/25/2023 5:14:00 AM

Previous boyfriends?

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 9/25/2023 4:50:00 AM

Oh noo noo brothaaaa … there is there is!!! REAL , blood sucking fuckers with fangs!!!!! They think they all that … but in reality they not even worth the tiny sands under my shoes!!!

Ink Empress

Date: 9/25/2023 4:08:00 AM

Whoa papi! You made me go omg! What a brilliant pleiades on vampires! You’ve got it all covered all aspects of a vampire! Always love a good vampire story ae! And you did it so well here. I especially love “ vulture seeking its prey” deep! “ victims heedless to threat” how true! This conveys so much and is so haunting! Absolutely love this! Congratulations in advance! Definitely a winner