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Vampire

Vile creature of the night; vice unquenched, sees her, the victim, innocent, warm; veins lush with blood. He feeds vacates, leaves behind a vapid ashen corpse; her vital signs fade to naught.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/2/2023 3:02:00 PM
Well, that chilled me bones… cheers for that… have you seen the price of electrickery lately? A fine, nerve jangling win, Terry. Congrats (belatedly)
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/24/2023 3:43:00 AM
Thank you Terry
Date: 9/28/2023 6:27:00 PM
Chilly, scary and especially loved the last line! Congrats on your win, Terry!
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/24/2023 3:44:00 AM
Thank you Laura
Date: 9/28/2023 10:51:00 AM
So well expressed, Terry, with original and innovative images that flow through the veins of this Pleiades! Congratulations! Blessings! Cheers!
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/24/2023 3:44:00 AM
Thank you Sam for your very kind words
Date: 9/27/2023 7:22:00 PM
Really well done, Terry. CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/24/2023 3:45:00 AM
Thank you Janice
Date: 9/27/2023 10:57:00 AM
A terrific vampire poem! Congratulations on your win, Terry. :)
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/24/2023 3:45:00 AM
Thank you so very much Evelyn
Date: 9/27/2023 9:58:00 AM
Once again back to your great pleiades with congratulations, Terry!
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/24/2023 3:45:00 AM
Thank you Valsa
Date: 9/27/2023 8:36:00 AM
Hi Terry, I don't know how I missed this, good “Pleiade” on a vampire. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-)Alexis
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/24/2023 3:46:00 AM
Thank you Alexis
Date: 9/27/2023 6:10:00 AM
Very nicely written Terry, Congrats on your win
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/27/2023 7:25:00 AM
Thank you Joseph, for the high placement, and for running the contest.
Date: 9/21/2023 8:20:00 AM
Excellent Pleiades Terry, cant fault it. Love it.
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/22/2023 5:27:00 AM
Thank you SV
Date: 9/21/2023 2:32:00 AM
- Yes, an ugly creature ... well described, Terry :) - GL in the contest :) -
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/22/2023 5:28:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 9/20/2023 4:31:00 AM
"Leaves behind a vapid ashen corpse"! Terrifying ! Great Pleiades and a beautiful entry for the contest. All the Best Terry !
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/24/2023 3:46:00 AM
Thank you Valsa I always appreciate your kind comments

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