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Upon a Bed of Petals

I am holding my hands over my eyes, I want to listen to what sound resides. I can hear the waves beating on the ground. The slow rhythm of each wave as it pounds. The squawk of a bird, I can hear far away. Soft whispers, as the wind has something to say. I settle back on the ground to listen. On the warm ground I purr like a kitten. The warmth I feel from the sun on my face. Thoughts are roaming through time and through space. I have a peace of mind it’s hard to explain. Like the coolest water from a short summer rain. My body settles down so softly in this land. I’m lying upon a bed of petals in the sand. - For Upon A Bed Of Petals contest

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Date: 4/4/2013 5:49:00 PM
Dear Donald, Got all my senses motivated with YOUR descriptive vivid imagery.If I write the wrong word in a POEM it stays there Forever. No body ever tells me I made a mistake. Probably because if they did it once they know they don't have time to say something Everytime I miscue. Another Classic.Congratulations With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Donald Williams
Date: 4/17/2014 8:47:00 AM
Thanks Harry for your comments, very pleasent indeed sir.
Date: 4/4/2013 5:47:00 PM
Dear Donald, Got all my senses motivated with YOUR descriptive vivid imagery.If I write the wrong word in a POEM it stays there Forever. No body ever tells me I made a mistake. Probably because if they did it once they know they don't have time to say something Everytime I miscue. Another Classic.Congratulations With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 4/4/2013 3:43:00 PM
Very good Donald, nice story, great flow, good luck in the contest.Take care Regards Richard
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Date: 4/4/2013 7:31:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Donald. - Good luck in the contest! // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/3/2013 5:19:00 PM
Pretty poem , Congratulations on your membership
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Date: 4/3/2013 10:25:00 AM
Hello Fellow Lifetime Souper: A very relaxing read ....however, do you really mean 'pedals' LOL
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Date: 4/3/2013 10:29:00 AM
uhm, that was a great catch LOL I have no idea what I was thinking. The circumstances of doing these from work I suppose @_@ ;)

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