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shoreless bounding main veiled magic in such splendor laughing at its yoke Water Themed Haiku Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchen 08/14/2018

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/25/2019 1:31:00 AM

beautiful; enjoyed

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/16/2018 1:35:00 AM

A creative haiku Charlie. I enjoyed it! : )

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/14/2018 3:13:00 PM

Creative work. Way to go. Enjoyed reading this one. Sara

Charlie Smith
Date: 11/15/2018 11:35:00 AM

Thank you Sara...

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/8/2018 4:37:00 PM

A wonderful Haiku Charlie. Love the image. This is a winner that goes into my Haiku faves. Have a wonderful end to your Monday Charlie. Your friend always....Mike.

Charlie Smith
Date: 11/15/2018 11:36:00 AM

Thank you Mike...

Warren Doll

Date: 10/5/2018 7:51:00 AM

Wonderful haiku, Charlie. I especially liked the last line. ~Warren

Charlie Smith
Date: 10/5/2018 10:48:00 AM

Thank you Warren...

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/24/2018 4:37:00 PM

great imagery in your haiku, Charlie

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/25/2018 9:05:00 AM

Thank you Agnes...

Paul Callus

Date: 8/20/2018 4:14:00 PM

You caught my attention, especially the end line...I'm surprised that this is not on the winners' list, Charlie:( Regards // paul

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/21/2018 1:55:00 PM

Thanks Paul, just kinda goes that way...

Warren Doll

Date: 8/20/2018 8:32:00 AM

Well written haiku, Charlie. This is a winner.

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/20/2018 9:37:00 AM

Thank you Warren...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/16/2018 7:36:00 PM

a winner for me, charlie... enjoyed the aha moment... huggs

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/20/2018 9:37:00 AM

Thank you Nette...

Silent One

Date: 8/15/2018 4:46:00 PM

Great imagery Charlie... Great haiku..

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/16/2018 9:52:00 AM

Thanks Silent One...

Anil Deo

Date: 8/15/2018 9:08:00 AM

amen to the breaking of any unwelcome tethers. Best wishes in the "Water haiku" contest. Shalom, shalom Charlie

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/16/2018 9:42:00 AM

Thank you Anil...

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/14/2018 4:40:00 PM

Great one Charlie ! :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 8/16/2018 9:38:00 AM

Thanks Heidi...