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Unknown Friendship

Woke up today feeling numb, My heart was in the deepest pain, Didn't know where it was coming from yet, I know one thing that was there, I was wrong about my friends who I thought I can truly trusted best, Yet I know someone who will always be there, And watch over me from high above, I wish I could see Him and come to Him as a child, I am not embarrassed to talk my emotions out my heart, My friendship has disappeared for those who lie, Several times without thinking that I can see, I am not deaf, blind and I can hear what you may think I don't, I will never trust anybody by my first glance, I will test my friends and there true friendship, I call this an unknown friendship.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/8/2009 1:47:00 PM
Interesting expression of your feelings in this Free Verse. Pure Friendship is so valuable nowadays. Thank you for your comment. The title Santa Monica refers to Santa Monica, California - a place were I used to live.
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Date: 8/8/2009 9:01:00 AM
Interesting.. nice work. All the work.
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Date: 8/8/2009 7:28:00 AM
I am so happy to have the time to read your excellent poetry this beautiful Saturday morningShirin. Keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2009 8:40:00 PM
Broken friendship, does indeed leave a hurt inside the heart, but we must learn to trust in the one above to mend this hurt, Sincerely Moses
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