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Universal Language of Love

Alabaster beaches, carrying dreamer's evening footprints, glisten heavenward. Impatient Jupiter kisses lingering moon. Neptune's ocean pulse quickens, rising slowly towards utopia. Virgo's wondrous Xanadu yeilds zenith. 09/24/15 Contest: Sensual ABCs Sponsor: Jade Puddifoot

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Robert Johnson

Date: 10/9/2015 2:21:00 PM

Love the clever title. Congrats on your win of a fun write to read.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/8/2015 2:13:00 AM

Wonderful write Arlene! Congrats on superb win!

Phatt Matt

Date: 10/6/2015 4:52:00 AM

Impatient Jupiter kisses lingering moon. BEAUTIFUL READ

Skat A

Date: 10/4/2015 6:51:00 PM

Arlene, Congrats on your beautiful win. Love SKAT

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/3/2015 11:51:00 PM

To my heart Arlene! A 7! Congrats on your win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2015 7:20:00 PM

ooh, love all the planetary references. Cleverly done. Congrats.

James Inman

Date: 10/3/2015 6:01:00 PM

Arlene, such playful words! Beautifully written.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/3/2015 5:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/3/2015 4:36:00 PM

This one is a real beauty Arlene! Outstanding imagery relating to the cosmos. Congratulations on your wonderful win! #7

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/3/2015 4:07:00 PM

this was very different, going the planetary/astrological/universal route, and i enjoy different takes...it was one of the most beautiful entries i received; i particularly like "neptune's ocean pulse quickens' - lovely - and virgo happens to be my star sign, so another reason to love it! (i before e in yields) congrats on your win in my contest!

Arlene Smith
Date: 10/16/2015 5:44:00 PM

Thank you so much fear friend!!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/3/2015 2:14:00 PM

this is beautifully sensual Arlene many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Miraj Raha

Date: 9/24/2015 5:09:00 PM

What a delight it is to the soul to read such a piece.

Arlene Smith
Date: 9/24/2015 5:19:00 PM

Thank you so much. Miraj!... Have a blessed day..