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Unique Flowers For My Sweet Pd

spring white roses stained with blood ~ fresh from the gardener's wound To: Linda (PD) From: KN A dark monoku for PD's Melt My Heart with Monoku Contest 11 February 2016

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Date: 4/24/2021 1:03:00 AM
Hello Kim. No word from you in over 5 years now but I keep checking back. Hoping you are well and will return to tell us so. I reread some of your poems and your comments on my poems. Miss your presence on poetrysoup. So many good poets gone. Wherever you are, I hope you're happy. Hugs. Jan
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Date: 4/4/2021 6:13:00 PM
Clever imagery. :0)
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Date: 4/12/2017 9:02:00 PM
nicely penned, happy easter :)
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Date: 2/17/2016 12:04:00 AM
that's one well penned monoku Kim, though dark, it still possess that creative imagination, congrats
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Date: 2/16/2016 10:07:00 AM
kim, a writhing piece... congrats on your finest win!.. huggs
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Date: 2/15/2016 10:59:00 PM
How lovely Kim.. no wonder it is a great win.. big congrats!
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Date: 2/15/2016 10:16:00 AM
Very nice, Kim! Love it. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/14/2016 6:47:00 PM
yours was SO poetic. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 2/14/2016 1:44:00 PM
Hi Kim, congratulations on your placement in Linda's contest. Blood Roses, a special way to show you care. This was a wonderful concept, different indeed....Vlad.
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Date: 2/14/2016 12:08:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Kim
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Date: 2/14/2016 4:11:00 AM
Creative...dark...beautiful...effective...and a much deserved top winner! Congratulations, Kim:) #7 ~ hugs // paul
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Date: 2/13/2016 9:58:00 PM
Wow! what a gift.... Love, Bobby
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Date: 2/13/2016 8:42:00 PM
Hello Kim, this one I love, it was the deepest of all my entries. thank you for following all my rules. :) Congratulations on your wonderful win. Thank you for melting my heart with your one liner. Stop by my latest blog "HOT AIR," if you'd like to view the lovely VALENTINES card I pinned for all the winning poems on my list. LOVE ~The Poet Destroyer~
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Date: 2/14/2016 6:51:00 AM
:-) Thank you, Linda. Didn't fancy myself a dark imagist, but that one line was a challenge, and I like the play on "fresh from the garden". Glad that you appreciate this inspired write. hugs!
Date: 2/13/2016 6:23:00 PM
wow, truly dark. I love it, Kim
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Date: 2/13/2016 10:40:00 AM
the image goes wonderfully with your words...it makes it come to life! Good write! Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 2/13/2016 6:35:00 AM
A touch of crimson for the bouquet...nice write Kim
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Date: 2/12/2016 5:43:00 AM
Superb Monoku! A seven dear Kim!
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Date: 2/12/2016 4:46:00 AM
- A very unique bouquet for your friend, Kim - Best wishes and a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/11/2016 3:05:00 PM
Deep and dark I think Linda will love it Kim:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/11/2016 2:34:00 PM
Very evocative... Well penned Kim.
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Date: 2/11/2016 12:37:00 PM
you whammed it, kim... dark and beautiful..huggs
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