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Unforgettable-Based On Silent One's Poem

One day I decided to go and sit in the park. I sought fresh inspiration and a new muse! My decision was the perfect panacea done on a lark. In no way would my spirit this time me refuse! I sought fresh inspiration and a new muse. Out of nowhere a cynosure materialized! In no way would my spirit this time me refuse. My heart pounded, I held my breath, I was mesmerized! Out of nowhere a cynosure materialized! An angelic ingenue was walking in my view! My heart pounded, I held my breath, I was mesmerized! This Woman's presence stopped all of time! This is true! An angelic ingenue was walking in my view! Both subtle and profound glamour did she possess. This Woman's presence stopped all of time! This is true! Dumbfounded and speechless was I! This I do profess! Both subtle and profound glamour did she possess. She had a feline lissome movement in her stride! Dumbfounded and speechless was I! This I do profess! Bewilderment and inspiration within did collide! She had a feline lissome movement in her stride. A demure aura emanated as she smiled! Bewilderment and inspiration within did collide. My composure I tamed for this vision drove me wild! A demure aura emanated as she smiled. The most mellifluous "Hello!" exited her lovely mouth! My composure I tamed for this vision drove me wild! I floated north and simultaneously, I crashed south! The most mellifluous "Hello!" exited her lovely mouth. I was frozen in this most ineffable of human states! I floated north and simultaneously, I crashed south! Her chatoyant orbs for eyes launched me right into space! I was frozen in this most ineffable of human states. What would it take to keep this moment sempiternal? Her chatoyant orbs for eyes launched me right into space. I will never be the same outwardly nor internal! What would it take to keep this moment sempiternal? My decision was the perfect panacea done on a lark! I will never be the same outwardly nor internal. One day I decided to go and sit in the park! WTA-IV 5/12/2016 Pantoum Form *Written in response to Silent One's poem "Unforgettable" with a challenge request to use the 10 following words- Chatoyant, Cynosure, Demure, Glamour, Ineffable Ingenue, Lissome, Mellifluous, Panacea and Sempiternal!

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Date: 5/13/2016 11:55:00 AM
wowsie, with those difficult words , you even quilled a challenging form... amazing work all the way, walter!..huggs
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 5/13/2016 3:23:00 PM
Hello Nette! :-) Thank You very much! As written to Richard, can't wait to casually use some of these words and get the "what did you just say!?!?!" responses! :-)
Date: 5/13/2016 8:03:00 AM
Impressive, I see you more than met the challenge. You did it with a very difficult form. I enjoyed this piece very much.
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 5/13/2016 3:20:00 PM
Thank You Richard! This was fun to do! Now to put those words into use day to day and enjoy the looks of "what!?!?" :-)
Date: 5/12/2016 8:52:00 PM
Amazing, Walter! Such a well-written Pantoum using the required words, and with them you created a really romantic adventure. Congrats on meeting Silent One's challenge so well. Sandra
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 5/13/2016 3:08:00 PM
Thank You Sandra! Every one I read was superb in content and being "visual" as was your Ballerina!....and learned a slew of new words in the bargain! :-) Thank You!