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Unfading Music

"unfading music" I hear music softly she plays within my soul unfading she plays within my heart it matters not to me when outwardly tunes cease for it matters to me music continues inwardly amazing as it seems birds know this singing angelic tunes in rhythm with rhyme showing how to feel with good graces suns rise moons beam music unfadingly plays SkyWatcher 09-10-23

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Date: 9/18/2023 2:25:00 AM
Love this dear Lisa. So beautifully written. I love the title. The last stanza, in particular, is divine especially the last line,’music unfadingly plays’. Very profound, enlightening poem. Thank you. Hugs and smiles for a great week :):)
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 10/3/2023 5:46:00 AM
Christina Christina Christina. Good Morning. Thank you ever so much for mentioning the title because I love titles. Thank you also for telling me of what you liked within the entry. Words do not express my appreciation for such graciousness and generosity. Truly. May this day find you well. Have a wonderful morning. I will see you soon on your page. I am very sorry for this late response. Blessings (smile)
Date: 9/15/2023 5:19:00 AM
My friend, this is indeed a very fine piece. A poem of positivity and light. A new fav for me. God bless you my friend.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 10/3/2023 5:44:00 AM
Good Morning Robert. Hi. Once again I am sorry for this late response. Blessings back to you so thank you for that and for your generosity. May this day find you well. I will see you on your page soon. Have a wonderful day. Blessings (smile)
Date: 9/13/2023 5:01:00 PM
A FAV for my collection, Lisa. I especially like the last verse, "with good graces suns rise moons beam music unfadingly plays". Lovely thought, music unfadingly playing. Very comforting, my dear friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 10/3/2023 5:42:00 AM
Good Morning Mr. Bill. Hi. Blessings back to you. Truly. I'm so very sorry for this late response. Never do I take you your visits or reviews for granted. Words do not express... May this day find you and Sara well. Blessings now and always to both of you. Have a beautiful morning and day. I will see you on your page soon. Blessings and Peace (smile)
Date: 9/11/2023 3:09:00 AM
If music be the food of love play on - Twelfth Night.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 9/13/2023 5:35:00 AM
Yes Yes and Yes. Hello Victor. Exactly. Thank you as always for visiting my page and entries. May melodies always play even when the music stops. Have a wonderful afternoon. Love Peace and Blessings now and always. (smiles...)
Date: 9/10/2023 1:08:00 PM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 9/13/2023 5:30:00 AM
Good Morning Jeanette. Hello. Thank you very much. May the melodies continue to play for one and all even when the music stops. Have a wonderful day. Take Care (smile)