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Unexpected Turn In Life

A graceful woman with pretty facial features and gorgeous structure walks on the street everyday dreading a boy who loves her. But why is the fear? Because it is he who loves her and not she. She has a lot of goals to be achieved and is earnestly walking toward success path. Hence rejecting the proposals.But the boy who waits for her reply fails to understand her notions.. instead keeps creating moments to impress her..Ultimately with a fierce mind set, one day he approaches the girl and asks her final decision.. when she denies..he assaults her with a knife on her face and strikes brutally.. and instantly disappears when the girl yells out in pain.. People crowded at the spot & finds her in a pool of blood. Being rushed to hospital ..she is alive but face damaged ., in ugly shape due to several stitches..she bursts out looking at her face in mirror. There she dies internally..with a broken ambitions. And to make you all aware,One of her aim was to taste the field of modelling. Pch... now ...a big pause... Will she be able to wake up from her tragedy?Does she need to cover her face? Should she wear a mask and then go out?Won't the society accept her without a mask? What about her career? An incomplete destination.. Mask is just a facade which can be worn to hide the scars but not emotions... Her heart is tightly fastened by pain and cries...!!!! 25-7-2020 Note:Mask poetry Contest(N/A) Submitting to Strand Completely New (19) , Any Form,Any Theme Poetry Contest.

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Date: 7/25/2020 11:49:00 AM
Hello Deepa, the guy should be charged of this crime of stabbing the woman. She will have to live with the scar. If can afford it plastic surgery. Enjoy your daymy friend. Much love darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/26/2020 4:38:00 PM
Hello Deepa, it is a common incident there! I say the person that gave her the scar should pay for her plastic surgery. I feel so sorry for the poor woman. Enjoy your evening my friend, much love Darlene
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/26/2020 2:49:00 AM
Hello Darlene mam, It's a common incident over here...few of them are put behind bars,few of them escape the punishments.Yes the victim needs to live with a scar.Fearing the high expense for plastic surgery they don't opt for it.Hence suffer lifelong or commit suicide. Enjoy your day too..dear Darlene mam:-)Much love

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