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Unexpected Joy

My life was droning along, quite monotonously like a tired, worn-out song... drawling endlessly Then one day it happened- two whole lives affected a simple letter was penned, something unexpected The letter said “How 'bout it? Can we write a poem together?” I wanted to say “I doubt it” and avoid it altogether But the letter said it's “more fun” to write in collaboration so I said “Okay, let's do this” despite my reservations We picked a topic at random, I didn't know where to start but as soul-fated chums, we wrote complementary parts I started in the middle, while she penned beginning and end when put together, it made us smile- and we were instant friends! That's how I came to know her- yes, this wise and clever faerie a friend I love the very best, a creative visionary Poems only our tribe would “get”... our silliness in synchrony I am so glad that we have met, I'm sure she would agree Like loving mothers, we watch enthralled as our muses frolic and play such wild creations- we love them all, surprised by what they say! This describes how I became friends with my dear soul-sister, Caren Krutsinger... the first of many awesome people I would meet on the 'Soup!

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Date: 12/11/2018 9:50:00 PM
I love this! I knew it was Caren! I love the idea of you two being moms with these muses/toddlers on a sort of play date! well done! Your admiration and value of your friendship is so clear in this poem.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/12/2018 4:21:00 AM
Thank you so much!! ;)
Date: 12/11/2018 8:17:00 PM
I love this one! You know I DO! It makes me feel so humble and pleased and smug. Trixie my muse has formed a little band, and she is banging symbols and drums and stuff. Wait! She is in the car now honking for me to come pick you up, and we will play crazy together! Too bad you are so far far away, and I have to work tomorrow. Down Trixie! Down!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/12/2018 4:20:00 AM
Hahahaahhaaa!! ;D I can picture this so clearly! "Down Trixie! Down!"
Date: 12/11/2018 5:09:00 PM
NICE...What a wonderful lady in Caren...Good to know you connected so naturally...speaks volumes...All the best Rhona
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/11/2018 6:23:00 PM
Aawww, thank you so much! ;)
Date: 12/11/2018 3:21:00 PM
this is really charming, Rhona. Yes, Caren is such an amazing person to know on the soup. It's great you became good friends.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/11/2018 6:23:00 PM
Thank you! Yes, I'm so glad she reeled me into the group! ;)
Date: 12/11/2018 2:13:00 PM
Lovely verse Rhona, you're lucky to have met Caren, a lovely lady here on soup. Tom.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/11/2018 6:13:00 PM
Thank you, Tom! Yes.... she's been a joy & an inspiration to me! ;)
Date: 12/11/2018 1:11:00 PM
Yes, Caren is a delightful sprite, as is this winsome, warm write!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/11/2018 6:12:00 PM
Thank you!! :))

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