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Under the Palm Tree

sitting in the shade of a palm tree came here seeking for answers from modern cities,I flee to the bosom of my ancestors up to the blue bed,rising my dusted eye on the horizon to the west to the shining sun where it lie knights on horseback,rising dust hunting for phantoms so thirsty for life battles will last want nothing less than victory everything is passing by me so fast sands tickling my face,whispering "hey" wake up it is end of the day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/26/2015 12:04:00 AM
ARABIAN:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 7/27/2015 1:53:00 PM
Thanks so much for being always here for us dear Skat A
Date: 7/21/2015 3:43:00 PM
I like the idea here. What better place to dream and meditate than under a palm tree. Maybe get a wake up call. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 7/22/2015 3:12:00 AM
I actually wrote it under a palm tree Thanks dear Daver
Date: 6/25/2015 9:54:00 AM
Really thanks to all of you for your support and encouragement . I am really honored for knowing you all especially Peter thanks man and God bless you all
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Date: 6/20/2015 11:29:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry this evening. Welcome to the soup my new friend.
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Date: 6/21/2015 12:23:00 AM
it is my honor you did . And thanks again
Date: 6/17/2015 4:09:00 PM
Mofeed, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/17/2015 6:52:00 PM
Most thanks to you for this warm welcoming and I look forward to it dear friend Linda
Date: 6/16/2015 9:29:00 AM
Excellent write Mofeed you painted this very beautiful and welcome to soup...God bless......A.M.
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Date: 6/16/2015 12:35:00 PM
Thanks for encouraging me and for welcoming me here God bless you too
Date: 6/16/2015 4:37:00 AM
- Welcome to P Soup, Mofeed ! - A poem that warms your heart or relieve your pain ... share your own poems here with us - Write poems and send it out into the world, I look forward to your next poem :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/16/2015 12:37:00 PM
Thanks for your warm welcome
Date: 6/15/2015 7:14:00 PM
Mofeed, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/15/2015 8:45:00 PM
Dear SKAT A, I really thank you for your sweet welcoming and these sweet words. And it is my honor to be a friend of yours .