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Pry me essence Of honey dew melon Fat back gimme Mo collard greens Gimme essence from Flavas undone Marmalade too Of long ivory tusks That elephants do From the flight Of the whip poor will Till The next rains flood Those plains Talking bout old essence Encountered From far and near Yet never here To the dried up bones That bake in the in the Sahara sun As the mighty Mississippi Giving life to everyone Visions from the native Child tears from fear And unrest While there forefathers Laugh and cry then Turn over in their graves As the millions man woman child Hordes March on on and on Undaunted and forever .. Wounded All rights reserved A.camacho jr. 1996-2015

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Date: 4/21/2015 8:32:00 AM
Tony, this is a brilliant write. Truly enjoyed. Well done. Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 3/20/2015 6:04:00 PM
Tonyocaa, Congratulations on your awesome win........ Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/20/2015 7:38:00 PM
Thanks Linda,nice to hear from you,Greatly appreciated..Tocaa
Date: 3/19/2015 6:15:00 PM
Tonytocaa, congratulations on your high marks in my contest - 3rd place! Verlena
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Date: 3/19/2015 6:45:00 PM
Verlena,thank you so much,for your consideration,this poem lends itself to Open mic and my favorite type of poetry,even if I didn't place..it was an honor to be in your Contest..palante..Tocaa

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