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"Spinning, my world is tripped upon its axis as the feeling you deliver wraps around my mind."   Call it what you must the ebb and flow   the tide, the tow your moons inhale my fate   lost breath feelings dance across my tongue and I'm tied into you   eyes fade with the face of time unspoken words illuminate a starlit sky   as my hand slips silently   near your unrest   entwine the night into the day where freedoms come to play dream if nots but what shall be in worlds uncovering

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Date: 6/1/2018 1:58:00 AM
You are the master of love poetry, another great poem!!
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Date: 5/31/2018 10:11:00 PM
Beautifully written and sculpted Tim...always a pleasure to read :)
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Date: 5/31/2018 4:30:00 PM
Near your unrest, hmmm. Wonderful write Tim, well done...
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Date: 5/31/2018 3:28:00 PM
Did you find you a woman Tim or is this just the poet? If you did, she is a lucky girl because you have a silver tongue:) I have always marveled at your talent. This one is no different.
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Date: 5/31/2018 1:27:00 PM
You have a way with words Tim. :)
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Date: 5/31/2018 1:27:00 PM
very beautiful Tim... hope she has a celestial body!!:-)hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/31/2018 12:39:00 PM
- Beautiful, Tim - Love the last verse :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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