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Unconditional

I want to purify my love for you, cleanse it of all expectations, of all desires, of all that is about me, until it runs clear like spring water that I pour for you when you are thirsty, without asking anything in return, and you can accept it from me without second thoughts, as you do not question the spring that flows in unconditional abundance. From my new collection The Eden of Perhaps (Spartan Press, 2020)

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Date: 3/14/2022 9:04:00 AM
This is lovely Agnes, you are lovely...
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Date: 5/13/2020 8:05:00 AM
as love should be. wonderful words Agnes.
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Date: 3/6/2020 8:07:00 PM
A FAVE for me. Absolutely beautiful, Agnes.
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Date: 2/12/2020 3:35:00 PM
wow, what an excellent metaphor for unconditional love. Too much murky water in today's world.
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Date: 1/29/2020 5:34:00 AM
Simple common words to convey a beautiful thought. My favourite sort of poetry.
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Date: 1/28/2020 1:32:00 PM
Agnes what a beautiful write! Congrats on your top win!;)
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Date: 1/24/2020 2:51:00 PM
Agnes, a wonderful write and a beautiful message. If only the world were filled with this kind of love, what a wonderful place it would be. Well done, and congrats on your placement in Brian's contest. ~ John
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/24/2020 3:23:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, John.
Date: 1/24/2020 1:09:00 PM
Well-done! Heartiest congratulations on your win, Agnes:-) Again, welcome back!
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/24/2020 3:07:00 PM
Thank you, Edward