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we soared over clouds didn't dare look below capricious emotions could wither or grow you played your guitar i liked what i heard but to finish your song you needed my word i'm low man on the totem pole and you're my belle of rock and roll "now play that song with twice the soul - don't you love it?" there's oneness in twoness to stare in the eyes of one who looks deeply embracing surprise one jigsaw piece left in the puzzle of you do i fancy that piece might be me? or who? i'm minoring in history you're majoring in mystery do i like you unconditionally - do i love you? will you touch my life? will we fly to clouds above? is it me or who? is it like? is it love? we had our lives ahead of us we had so much in common and as you once remarked to your cat, "how wonderfully uncommon is that?"

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Date: 4/23/2022 7:14:00 PM
"minoring in history // majoring in mystery" -- What a memorable couple of lines and rhymes, John! Great write! Have a blessed Sunday, Gershon
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John Watt
Date: 4/25/2022 10:48:00 AM
Gersho, thank you! I always enjoy when an admired poet leaves an uplifting comment, especially when they point out the line they find memorable. You are appreciated ~ John
Date: 4/22/2022 1:11:00 AM
Wonderful pen! The picture is so beautiful and the poem is amazing! Great work :)
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Date: 4/25/2022 10:47:00 AM
Komal, thank you for your lovely comment. It is nice to meet you here at poetry soup ~ John
Date: 3/6/2022 5:06:00 AM
Lovely write. The sky is so beautiful, and cats are cool. Ann
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Date: 3/6/2022 3:59:00 PM
Thank you Ann. I hope you are enjoying your weekend.
Date: 3/3/2022 12:30:00 PM
and what was the movie that went along with this one? Just reading your reply to me now. I think I am caught up with all your poems. Let me check a few more recent ones to be sure, sir!! or sure, shore (depending on one's dialect. haha)
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Date: 3/3/2022 1:51:00 PM
The movie was Flight (with Denzel Washington as the pilot who makes a miraculous landing). Above the clouds everything looked so peaceful, then diving down through the clouds as the passengers all freak out.
Date: 2/26/2022 12:33:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this romantic write. God bless!
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Date: 2/26/2022 8:20:00 PM
Grateful for your kind read and comment, Valerie. God bless you ~ John
Date: 2/25/2022 9:28:00 AM
Hi John my friend, what a wise lady to speak to her cat, like that - for it is truly uncommon, to find a mate with whom you find so much in common. Very important in a loving lasting relationship. love this poem, thank-you for your wonderful visits and awesome comments John. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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John Watt
Date: 2/26/2022 8:18:00 PM
Yes, you are right about the importance of commonalities in a lasting relationships. Sometimes natural, sometimes nurtured. So grateful for you and your wonderful, thoughtful comments. Blessings and hugs ~ John
Date: 2/22/2022 4:18:00 PM
this is very cool, John and makes me wonder what inspired it. like Connie says, it's a bit whimsical!
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Date: 2/22/2022 8:32:00 PM
It started with a dream I had a week ago, then I added bits and pieces of memories of a musician friend I had back in college, plus some influences from a movie I saw last week. Thanks for asking!
Date: 2/22/2022 2:36:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this whimsical poem John. Mysteries of love abound. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/22/2022 8:37:00 PM
Thank you Connie! I'm glad the sense of whimsy was able to shine through.
Date: 2/22/2022 10:51:00 AM
Wow! John, First of all, I must say good photo. This sounds like the start of something new. One may be apprehensive in its newness. But in life sometimes one has to take a leap of faith. You are such an amazing writer, I enjoy reading your work. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Date: 2/22/2022 8:46:00 PM
Thank you for your generous words and wise thoughts. This write describes feelings I had back in college. Life truly has turned out great, just not with her. Enjoy your day ~ John
Date: 2/22/2022 3:06:00 AM
Uncommonly good. Shalom shalom
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Date: 2/22/2022 8:47:00 PM
Appreciate your uplifting comment, Anil.
Date: 2/21/2022 9:52:00 AM
Capricious emotions, I like that word pairing.. this sounds lovely...
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John Watt
Date: 2/21/2022 12:40:00 PM
Thank you SO, I appreciate the visit.

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