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Unbound

Tossed in a deep sea and lost… Forgotten words of little cost… I stood behind letters never seen… Hid behind lines that were my dreams… Thought I drowned in a poetic rain… Only to awaken without restrain… A transparent soul no more… A mind cluttered with rhyming décor… Speaking in tongue over quiet sounds… With Hidden messages of faith sent unbound…

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/3/2013 8:47:00 AM

Michael; This is just beautiful. Words written from the soul. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Tara Jennings

Date: 3/2/2013 6:15:00 PM

Sometimes when I am in the artistic muse zone, the movement of awe that is the beauty of poetry and and art of language feels like a storm building on the horizon that I can't see, but can feel the weight of its electricity building inside myself. A truth I knew and lost, or know I will come to learn. Thats's whey I always come back to read your work, you remind me of that lost storm building and the energy felt but unseen. Thank you.

Judy Konos

Date: 3/1/2013 4:57:00 PM

When you cannot express yourself because something is so great then just a "thank you" will suffice.....So...thank you...

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/1/2013 4:43:00 PM

This is a tremendously wonderful write my friend! I loved reading this fantastic poem this evening! What a enlightening piece, truly phenomenal! Great Work!!