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Udacha - To Luck

Like the gentle oak she stands strong and slender, straight and sleek she will not bend nor break nor is she meek Magnificent , mysterious ,wild and free because her fruit falls close , her offspring stands pretty as she Softly glowing eyes ablaze in a fire of blue, Piercing ,teasing ,hypnotic and alluring A haunting beauty ,She stands tall in starry fields of lonely winter nights While The pale moon sets against a velvet carpet of purple and white Brown hair setting aflame the golden dawn of the oak after the long night She calls and I listen , all I need is a little luck and I will find Lost amidst all the Russian passion and beauty ,a diamond among the rough For any man to find such a friend is more than enough

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/6/2015 5:15:00 PM
More of the same please, nicely done
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Date: 4/5/2015 3:40:00 PM
Hello JIm, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Have yourself a Happy Easter ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 9/7/2012 4:40:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this creative and descriptive work..Thanks for your presence at my work..Sara
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