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Date: 3/28/2024

Contest: Senryu's 3 Rhymed by 3 Unrhymed 

Sponsor: Hilo Poet

Two wiener dogs meet Each yap loudly, strangely greet Oddly on the street Hounds bite other's butt Owner blames the other's mutt Not open and shut I note discreetly, "Both were gone quick and neatly, Devoured completely" Another witness Says, "'twas one, not two or none Lucky to remain" Judge asked the witness, "If each pooch ate the other Which was out, which in?" A surprise witness Loudly shouts, "there were two, they Switched identities"

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Date: 4/29/2024 12:01:00 AM
Enjoyed your senryu!
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David Crandall
Date: 4/29/2024 8:20:00 AM
I'm glad you liked it Karen!
Date: 3/28/2024 2:47:00 PM
Quite Surreal, but as humans belonging to weiner dogs know, the dogs often are! I liked your poem.
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David Crandall
Date: 3/28/2024 3:05:00 PM
Thanks! Haha, I got the direction of ownership mixed up!

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