Two Lovers

Two Lovers Authored by Chuck Keys Two lovers alone, Side on side as one, Hearts together united as one, Arms and hands entwined, tightly looped as one, Lips synced merged into each as one, Words unspoken, breathless heated passion as one, Ageless love, in love, as one.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/13/2013 1:47:00 AM

Chuck... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. goodnight. <3 =LINDA=

Kolapo Olapoju

Date: 10/5/2010 1:20:00 AM

Love so pure,spring water marvels............awesome read

Susan Palli

Date: 9/23/2010 1:49:00 AM

Nice one!

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/21/2010 9:46:00 PM

very profound is this. awesome. Harry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/21/2010 4:05:00 PM

What a wonderful love poem, Chuck. How lucky you are to find ageless love! Count your blessings! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/21/2010 7:46:00 AM

Very romanatic and passionate write, Chuck

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2010 11:51:00 PM

this is beautiful, romantic, Chuck! thanks for your comments today. LUv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/20/2010 5:11:00 PM

enjoyed

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/20/2010 5:03:00 PM

thats what i'm talkin bout

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/20/2010 2:31:00 PM

I agree Chuck, very special write here..always enjoyed Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/20/2010 2:12:00 PM

Chuck u have painted an awesome picture with your words.. feel like u were at my recent wedding and took it from our lovely ceremony.. two lovers fits us to a T... enjoyed and hope u entered this beauty in the Love Notes contest.. good luck with luv..