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Twilight's Call

Seagull song with no beginning Clouds that end in silent blue Empty valleys in stone canyons Echo calls of days' adieu Ripples on ancestral water Stretch on beyond the coral hue Leaving only twilight memories Of the love, I found in you written 2018.01.10

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Tamanna Bangthai

Date: 4/15/2019 11:12:00 PM

It's beautiful poem! Like a new perspective into the matter of life and love ??

Francis J Grasso
Date: 4/19/2019 7:54:00 AM

Thank you, Tamanna. ...Fran

Tonytocaa Camacho

Date: 4/15/2019 2:51:00 PM

Simply beautiful now that’s what I’m talking about ..wow tonytocaaxrb

Francis J Grasso
Date: 4/19/2019 7:53:00 AM

Thank you, Tonytocca. Happy you enjoyed reading it. ...Fran

Anna M Shepard

Date: 4/15/2019 11:11:00 AM

Well done! Love the imagery.

Francis J Grasso
Date: 4/19/2019 7:49:00 AM

Thank you, Anna. ...Fran

Fj Thomas

Date: 4/10/2018 3:18:00 PM

Fran this is such a beautiful piece. Then ending just makes you smile.

Francis J Grasso
Date: 4/10/2018 4:51:00 PM

Thank you, FJ. Glad to hear you enjoyed reading.... Fran

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/17/2018 9:26:00 PM

Charming poem. Congrats on your win, Francis.

Francis J Grasso
Date: 1/19/2018 10:15:00 AM

Thank you, Line. ...Fran

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/13/2018 10:50:00 AM

Breathtakingly beautiful, I am enchanted by the sentiment, flow and all else so poetically delivered! Hi, I don't believe we've crossed paths, but remembering isn't my strong suit - anyway, what a great poem for being introduced to your talent! It set the bar high. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Francis J Grasso
Date: 1/15/2018 10:45:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words, CayCay. Very happy you enjoyed this poem...Fran

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/10/2018 4:12:00 PM

This flows so beautifully, Francis! Well done :)

Francis J Grasso
Date: 1/10/2018 5:16:00 PM

Thank you, Laura. ...Fran

Silent One

Date: 1/10/2018 4:08:00 PM

That made me smile.. at least it was entered into a contest.. Have a pleasant evening...

Silent One

Date: 1/10/2018 3:34:00 PM

For a moment I thought this was for my contest... Very romantic Fran, but it seems this is about loss... Hope you are well..

Francis J Grasso
Date: 1/10/2018 3:54:00 PM

Hello Silent One... I am doing well, Thank you. Hope all is well with you. Thank you for the comments, they are very much appreciated. The poem was inspired by your contest. I originally had a pretty good start at it but my muse took over and this is what finally came out, so I entered it in Brian's contest... Fran