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Twilight

Ripples on ancestral water Stretch on beyond the coral hue. Leaving only twilight memories... Of the love, I found in you. Entered in Brian Strand's contest "MID JAN 2018 PREMIERE CONTEST" 1/13/2018 Taken from "Twilight's Call" 03/01/2020, for the Rithimus Divisa 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Gregory R Barden

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Date: 4/16/2020 12:42:00 AM
So lovely! This like a touch of sunshine on chilly morn. To my faves.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 4/16/2020 8:23:00 AM
Thank you, JCB. ...Fran
Date: 3/23/2020 10:23:00 PM
Lingering in love. Your thoughts whisper softly upon the page. Ripples on water- the sapphire blue, simply leaves me in awe. This is so beautiful and romantic. :) Brandy
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 3/24/2020 9:29:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy. Happy you enjoyed reading this. ...Fran
Date: 3/15/2020 9:02:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful! Bravo!
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 3/16/2020 8:31:00 AM
Thank you, Joe! ...Fran
Date: 3/4/2020 3:24:00 PM
this is so gorgeous. I hope it gets in the top ten.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 3/5/2020 4:17:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. ...Fran
Date: 3/3/2020 6:35:00 PM
Francis, your poem is lovely, well done _Constance
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 3/4/2020 12:43:00 PM
Thank you, Contance! ...Fran
Date: 3/1/2020 2:15:00 PM
Beautiful, Francis.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 3/2/2020 10:03:00 AM
Thank you, Line. ...Fran

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