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Turning and Waiting

What am I but an ironic turning of this mind, now frosted, from a short walk around the edge, of the corner, promising to never promise, even as I do? And even, as I do then; within the spin, of what I've seen, passing shadows and looks, along here and there, past where fragments of dreams, cool under their own clouds, time, and stars. Ah yes, my dreams, let us ransom other people, the other people outside the door. We have a way to go. Didn't you feel how much was missed, just waiting, to let it go?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/29/2015 5:41:00 PM
JAMES, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page during the last week of 2015 and beginning of 2016 :) awesome way to start the year... Enjoy the coming Year.... SKAT
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Date: 1/13/2015 8:29:00 AM
james deep excellent pen bless you
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James Ranahan
Date: 1/28/2015 3:49:00 PM
Thank you for your comment. Thank you for your poems. I enjoyed both.

Book: Shattered Sighs