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Tunnel of Love

The narrow tunnel, darkened by shadows of denial; my vessel of hope, adrift on possibilities. A regretful mist hangs heavy in this melancholy place. The haunting echo's of could-have-beens stalking close behind, as I search for a spark of light at every turn. Unable to turn around this voyage of time, I will accept the fait that awaits me at the end. I wonder.......... Will you be there?......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/28/2015 8:29:00 AM
I love it...riding the waves of fate, yet hoping to reach the light at the end of the tunnel.
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Date: 1/26/2015 2:19:00 PM
Your word choices define what you wish to capture and convey these emotions well to the reader. Emile.
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Date: 1/26/2015 2:10:00 PM
- Man strongest trait is hope ..... never lose it - Someday love waiting for you, and it will bring you happiness dear Arlene :) - A great poem !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/26/2015 1:57:00 PM
Powerful pen Arlene! always seeking a light at the end of each journey thru a dark tunnel my dear friend. A 7 from me! Enjoyed your piece! Have a lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D. ^O^
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