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Treasure Me-Collab

If I were a statue made of glass from the sea Would you gaze upon the shards to see my inner beauty I would stand up tall, gaze longingly At the sun on your face, bright as stars could be A frozen form, glistening lovingly Caress me slowly there is no hurry Yield to the cracks of times great fury Every facet, every shine, with all its beauty This statue made of treasure, glass from the sea *And another beautiful Collab with Germaine Pasley* 6-10-12

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/21/2012 7:24:00 PM

This was SUHWEET. Love the collaberation--amazing job. :)

Ivy Vresk

Date: 6/20/2012 4:19:00 AM

there is no better way to start new day but with a such a well writen and romantic poems as your's,thank you Dan,my day just stared, Ivy

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/14/2012 10:49:00 PM

Yes Danny boy, I do treasure you and assure you are definitely not a statue. Your inner beauty shines in every comment you make and I wonder what I'd do without you. This poem is a caress to all who read it! Love, Elizabeth

Dan Kearley
Date: 6/14/2012 11:27:00 PM

;o) Thank you as always my dear... :o) For without you what would I do?

Carma Sanderson

Date: 6/14/2012 3:36:00 PM

Awwwweee!!!! This is a beautiful piece, Dan. Carma

Dan Kearley
Date: 6/14/2012 11:22:00 PM

Thanks Carma! :o)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/13/2012 9:03:00 PM

Hiya Dan! This is a new poet, Germaine. A superb collab that makes me escape the business of the day...refreshing feel. Great job to the BOTH of ya! Gwendolen

Dan Kearley
Date: 6/14/2012 11:21:00 PM

Well thanks,Gwendolen :o) Ya,she needs to get writing more...Ha,ha. Thanks for your kind comments,as always ;o)

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 6/12/2012 9:49:00 AM

very beautiful! this has a great flow to it and I love the picture it paints. I really like the last stanza's 1st 2 lines - delicate and slow and getting to know it, accepting the cracks :)

Dan Kearley
Date: 6/14/2012 11:14:00 PM

Thank you...Very much :o)