Transubstantiation

eyes on the runners boom…………… sweat to blood on the sidelines Patriots Day Kathryn McL. Collins April 28, 2013

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/3/2013 12:43:00 AM

This hit home! Incredible stuff you have-thanks again for sharing. : ) Always, Laura

Jack Horne

Date: 5/5/2013 2:56:00 PM

love this powerful write, my friend. Thanks for reading so many of my poems

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/5/2013 2:03:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your great work this afternoon..Thanks for your visits..I am glad that you too have seen a Indigo Bunting..They are a beautiful bird..Sara

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/3/2013 12:53:00 PM

Kathy... a poem with impact! Very concise... very nice... Terry ( I guess that was one of those words you were threatening me with... ;-) )

Daver Austin

Date: 4/30/2013 12:36:00 PM

Wow! Great title. A lot said in a very few words. This one drenches the reader. Love, daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/30/2013 9:38:00 AM

Kathryn, this is a very sad image. Not expect, for such a day... thank you for liking my Grandpa poem... I did argue with my fiance. After he reassured me on how that poem fits the bad poems, going on in the blogs. thank you very much... Linda

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 4/30/2013 8:56:00 AM

PS Soup mail!

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 4/30/2013 8:38:00 AM

'...sweat to blood on the sidelines,' '...BOOM,' stark images of what transpired in Boston on that fateful Patriots Day. An incredibly powerful piece. Well done Kathy!! Love, Keith