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Transcendence

When imbalance of life churns hapless poignancy And the zephyr of inequities breezes melancholy Dissonance reverberates echoing pathos of grief Seeking exaltation within metaphysical profundity As hushed posture conjures up humbling catharsis, Leaning in quietude, questing paranormal vitality, Liberating from bounds of mundane, the ordinary, Energizing calming bliss of unfamiliar, extrasensory. Mortal soul steadily crosses limits of understanding Reaching deep into unknown, unexplored territory, Daring to search for knowledge in mystical obscurity Pursuing enlightenment from supernatural intrigue, Discovering newfound acuity blossoming internally Adulating freedom of shedding narrow boundaries Gaining divine wisdom, postulating own doctrines, Comprehending missives in blissfulness of sagacity. As laments mellow in teachings of superior intellect And bawl of distraught soothes in heavenly solace Finding ambrosial tranquility in endearing calmness, Physiological longings amiably, peacefully dissipate And gradually soul enlightens, unafraid of mortality, Yearning for permanence of purposeful inviolability, Meaningful beyond self, detaching from materiality, Synchronizing harmoniously in idyllic, placid sanctity. January 21, 2022 Placed 1st: This or That, Vol 9 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Title chosen: Transcendence

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Date: 2/8/2022 1:39:00 PM
Overall this is a super write! Great depth of thought here.
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Date: 2/2/2022 3:49:00 PM
Very deep. I think it is just what the sponsor hopes for.
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Date: 2/1/2022 9:52:00 AM
Wow and wow again my friend, three verses of extraordinary depth, volume and understanding of life but seeking and finding and constantly gaining knowledge of earth and humanity . I applaud you my friend and awesome poet Vijay. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 1/31/2022 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations for being on the top 10 poem list for the month :)
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Date: 1/31/2022 12:27:00 PM
Lovely piece Vijay, full of great imagery and insightful thought too. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 1/31/2022 2:46:00 AM
Vijay, I like the feeling of wise meditative writing you do ( my dad's Dad, dhadha, was a self- taught Oandit in South Africa). Few on earth can match brahmins love if learning. May I say, it shows best in you. PTL
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Date: 1/30/2022 4:49:00 PM
An excellent pen Vijay, uplifting and so well crafted. A new fav.
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Date: 1/29/2022 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. The poem is awesome. You touch on so much wisdom that it is hard to comprehend in one reading. I'll be back many times, I'm sure. Thanks for sharing through your mindful poetry, Vijay. A poet friend, Bill
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/30/2022 1:29:00 PM
Thank you Bill. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.
Date: 1/28/2022 10:23:00 AM
Vijay, as always, every line is a treasure and a challenge to meditation on the synchronization of ego, heart, head and spirit. Wonderfully written. Congrats and hats off for your win!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/30/2022 1:28:00 PM
So very kind of you. Many thanks Sam.
Date: 1/28/2022 5:21:00 AM
Outstanding work, Vijay:-) Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/30/2022 1:28:00 PM
Much appreciate Edward. Many thanks for sponsoring contests.
Date: 1/26/2022 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Transcendence" is a creative write. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...........
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/30/2022 1:28:00 PM
Thank you Paula.
Date: 1/25/2022 7:47:00 PM
Your writings are always a pleasure to read. This is one of them too. Very beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/30/2022 1:27:00 PM
Thank you Christuraj.
Date: 1/25/2022 6:31:00 AM
Reading this excellent poem feels like I'm intruding in your meditative zen garden, Vijay. There, in moments of peaceful calm, your muse visits and inspires such awesome poetry. ~ Best regards, my friend. // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/30/2022 1:27:00 PM
Thank you Paul.
Date: 1/24/2022 3:56:00 AM
Incredible... Words of wisdom flow like a unblemished sacred river... How blessed we are to read a spotless poetry like this... "Unafraid of mortality, detaching from materiality" Great words... A fav...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/24/2022 2:03:00 PM
So very kind of you to say so, Supraja. Much appreciate your kind remarks. So special to receive your FAVE. Many many thanks.
Date: 1/24/2022 12:36:00 AM
Your epic poem, certainly fit the title, Vijay. Love it.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/24/2022 2:01:00 PM
many thanks Harry--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 1/23/2022 6:29:00 AM
Gaining divine wisdom, postulating own doctrines, Comprehending missives in blissfulness of sagacity. Vijay, you have a lovely dissemination of insight in this excellent poetry about spiritual transcendence. In this sophisticated and passionate poem, you challenge humanity's most significant intellectual beliefs and presumptions. Thank you very much for your fantastic contribution. You have an excellent way of conveying your most profound views. This is going to be one of my favorites. Please accept my heartfelt greetings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/24/2022 2:01:00 PM
I am always delighted to read your feedback, Lassad. You are so kind and generous to many on Soup with your thoughtful comments. Much appreciate and value your opinion and I am honored to receive your FAVE. Many thanks.
Date: 1/23/2022 2:39:00 AM
Interesting lines for the contest. Way to go. Sara
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/23/2022 5:41:00 AM
Thank you Sara. Much appreciate.
Date: 1/23/2022 1:41:00 AM
A poem that challenges the philosophical mind of Man. Profound and dynamic. A pearl of wisdom, my friend, Vijay! Blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/23/2022 5:41:00 AM
Glad to hear that my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Demetrios. Many thanks.
Date: 1/22/2022 6:12:00 PM
A profound and illuminating piece that pleads for reflective contemplation. I loved this wonderful entry Vijay. You are masterful at expressing your deepest thoughts. This is sure to rate high my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/23/2022 5:40:00 AM
So special my friend coming from you. Glad you stopped by, Connie, with your kind remarks. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Date: 1/22/2022 2:33:00 PM
Stirring message of transcendence, also love the closing lines~
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/23/2022 5:39:00 AM
Thank you Michelle--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 1/22/2022 6:52:00 AM
Great flow of thoughts in this beautiful verse on spiritual transcendence Vijayji... "Discovering new found acuity blossoming internally", loved this line... the first time we realize our own selves, it is new found spark of knowledge of the Universal Truth. The last stanza is just amazing.. " physiological longings amiably peacefully dissipate... ", it's so true... at such a state of the final stage of spiritual transcendence, though I haven't experienced personally, maybe, that is how it is... the soul enlightens gradually... synchronizing harmoniously with the Ultimate Knowledge... Felt so blissful reading your as always amazing words... God bless... Ani
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/22/2022 8:35:00 AM
Much appreciate your thoughtful analysis, Ani--so special coming from a talented writer. Glad you stopped by with your kind remarks. Many many thanks.
Date: 1/22/2022 5:36:00 AM
Wow.... ! Vijay, you have the profundity of a philosopher, the vision of a mystic, the semantic prowess of a great writer and the lyrical exuberance of a poet ! A sure winner !
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/22/2022 8:30:00 AM
You have the power of words at your command my friend. Much appreciate your vote of approval, Valsa. Many thanks for your kind remarks.
Date: 1/21/2022 9:14:00 PM
Expressive, vividly descriptive, deep delving into a deep subject, Vijay. Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/22/2022 8:28:00 AM
Coming from you that means a lot, Janice. Much appreciate and value your feedback. Many thanks.
Date: 1/21/2022 6:23:00 PM
Vijay, well and thoroughly said. Would have taken me 8 pages and a week of editing. Haha sad, but true! I thanks you for so distinctly specking for me. A poem of truth.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/22/2022 8:27:00 AM
I know you create your own paintings, Sally, with superb images. So special to read your generous feedback. Much appreciate--many thanks for stopping by, Sally.
Date: 1/21/2022 5:35:00 PM
The way you put your thoughts together! Love “ambrosial tranquillity “
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/22/2022 8:25:00 AM
You convey that tranquility my friend. Much appreciate your visit, Kim. Many thanks.
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