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Too Soon, My Love - Too Soon

So, here we are again, my dear Our wondering hearts are trembling with fear Of the step we took in the pale moonlight Now, beholding each other in the bright sunlight. Remember our plan? We'll take it slow We'll allow our hearts and love to grow Without the pressure of passion released Too soon - but now, where do we go? Is it time for us now to say good bye - Do we gather ourselves and give it a try; Are we done, my love, and now we start On a future that tears our love apart? Oh, help me now to understand How we lost control of our senses and That now, our passion being fulfilled We ponder if our love is stilled. Yes, here we are again, sweet dear, Two wondering hearts now filled with fear For the step we took while under the Moon Was it too soon, my love - too soon?

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Date: 2/8/2022 7:50:00 PM
A very beautiful work. Congratulations!
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Neva Romaine
Date: 2/9/2022 7:23:00 AM
Sweet Christuraj, I cannot express how much it means to me to receive your wonderful comments on my Poems. I thank you so much for your support and I will make it a point to visit with your work also. Hugs and blessings to you. Neva
Date: 11/28/2015 3:07:00 PM
Neva, once again congrats on this fine gem. SKAT
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Neva Romaine
Date: 11/30/2015 10:28:00 AM
Hey SKAT, I appreciate the visit and your sweet and generous comments on my poem. I was nicely surprised with this placement. Be Blessed, Neva
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Neva Romaine
Date: 11/30/2015 10:26:00 AM
Hey SKAT
Date: 11/26/2015 10:01:00 PM
Wonderful pen Neva.. congrats on big win!
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Neva Romaine
Date: 11/30/2015 10:26:00 AM
Hey Dr. Upma, thank you very much for your visit and sweet comments on my poem. A very nice surprise. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 11/5/2015 12:09:00 PM
Hi Neva, congrats on your win in Rob Carmack's contest. SKAT
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Neva Romaine
Date: 11/5/2015 3:09:00 PM
Hey SKAT, thank you so much for your visit and comments, I do appreciate it. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 11/4/2015 10:12:00 PM
Congrats on huge win Neva with this superb write!
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Neva Romaine
Date: 11/5/2015 3:08:00 PM
Hey Dr. Upma, thank you for your visit and gracious comments. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 9/14/2015 1:54:00 PM
So very beautiful and touching. I know this feeling ... CayCay
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Neva Romaine
Date: 9/14/2015 3:14:00 PM
Hey CayCay, thanks for the sweet comments. I know so many others who have succumbed to those feelings...Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 4/13/2015 10:07:00 AM
A lovely emotional write here, Neva. A nice piece of work....Sharon G.
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Neva Romaine
Date: 4/14/2015 9:02:00 AM
Hey Sharon, I am so glad you stopped by and very appreciative your sweet comments. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 4/12/2014 7:44:00 PM
Hi Neva, beautiful words... ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. <3 =LINDA
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Date: 4/12/2014 1:47:00 PM
Beautifully written! Congratulations on being featured.
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Date: 4/7/2014 4:58:00 AM
A brilliant write. Congratulations on your poem being featured this wee, neva
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Date: 2/14/2014 6:32:00 AM
an amazing lovers lament. captured the passion and doubt of love seeking fulfillment under the ever influential moon. A sooth and easy read.
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Date: 2/10/2014 4:04:00 PM
Beautifully written, Neva. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Well done. :)
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Date: 12/7/2012 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Any 5 Lines" contest Neva. Love Carol
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Date: 12/2/2012 6:28:00 PM
NEVA... CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful poem... take care~PD
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Date: 12/1/2012 7:23:00 AM
Big congratulations on your winning place Neva xx
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Date: 11/30/2012 5:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your very well written poem in Debbie Guzzi contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Neva Romaine
Date: 12/1/2012 1:31:00 PM
Thank you Ms Anne Lise for your wonderful words of congratulations. I am so encouraged and I truly appreciate that you think so highly of my poem. Even though only the last four lines were allowed in the contest, it is exciting to know that Too Soon, My Love - Too Soon is so well received. Thanks again, and may God bless you always.
Date: 11/30/2012 3:52:00 PM
Guess you see how much I loved it ;) Please do enter my next 6 line contest...Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Neva Romaine
Date: 12/1/2012 1:26:00 PM
Dear Ms Debbie, I thank you so much for your wonderful words and that my poem, or any parts of it, has had such a encouraging effect on you. It means so much to me and I am honored that you think so highly of Too Soon, My Love - Too Soon. I look forward trying out for your next 6 line contest. Thank you again and may God bless you always.
Date: 11/21/2012 2:23:00 PM
I'd love to have the last 4 lines of this in my contest [It's a contest which only allows 4 lines ;) just repost the last 4 lines separately and please do enter!]Happy Thanksgiving Light & Love
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Date: 7/18/2012 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Neva. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2011 11:24:00 AM
Thoughtful.
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Date: 8/4/2011 8:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Neva.Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2011 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Neva. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/13/2011 12:47:00 PM
neva.. congratulations on your wonderful feature of the week... I sure enjoyed... take care,..p.d
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Date: 5/9/2011 10:00:00 PM
Hi Neva.....This is exactly the way I feel when starting a new relationship...our plan is always to take it slow..then the passion gets in there..and takes control..then you are left with what to do next...do ya take it to the next level..or do ya let it fall by the wayside?......Great heartfelt write here.....I loved it...........and could truly relate.....SugarbearUSA......:)
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Date: 5/9/2011 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Neva. Love, Carol
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