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This is a blues song set to the tune of"Red House" Hope you get a kick out of it. Lol

 

 

London bridge has fallen The queen of England has lost her crown London bridge has fallen The queen of England has lost her crown No more watchman on the wall And Humpty Dumpty done hit the ground . The river Rhine is running backwards Flowers won't bloom in midday sun The river Rhine is running backwards Flowers won't bloom in midday sun The ground is dead and the seed won't grow And I can't stand and I can't run . It's pitch black dark in New York City And east won't release the rising of the sun It's pitch black dark in New York City And east won't release the rising of the sun Lacuna beach waits patiently But that light don't ever come . My heart's as cold as winter midnight Spirit dry, as desert sand My heart's as cold as winter midnight Spirit dry, as desert sand Mind lost at sea and body sinking Not even Jesus would hold my hand

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Date: 2/26/2016 2:29:00 AM
- Man does not detect the really important moments in his life - not until it's over .... but it's never too late ..... as long as there is life there is hope, Kelly - A great poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/25/2016 9:22:00 PM
Great verse but Jesus would hold your hand if in faith you asked. I like it and admire those that can do the lyric form this well. A7
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Kelly Crenshaw
Date: 2/25/2016 9:28:00 PM
Thnx. I know. But the blues is the blues. Lol
Date: 2/25/2016 9:50:00 AM
There is this unique insurance your works always give my expectations And that satisfaction only builds more castles for my curiosity to thrive, waiting for subsequent results of your talent and thinking.
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Date: 2/4/2016 3:33:00 PM
I wouldn't bet on that Kelly! Peace and blessings my friend.
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