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Too Far

There are those poems repeal themselves When muses from afar Sudden step from darkened wells Or shimmer from a star Their silent voice is captured By fancy’s willing ear Unto their thought enraptured The poet subtly steers The pen is poised for action Prepared to ledger down The essence of the fashion – Waiting to astound! And then a sudden blank, it seems Falls soft before our eyes A curtain falls before the gleam We gaze on empty skies – Thus – to prove us quite mistaken The bashful thing retires As if it – too – with us was taken Too far for its desires

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Date: 3/17/2023 6:36:00 AM
Haha this might be why I've written about worms today! Thanks for adding me
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Date: 3/10/2023 9:47:00 AM
Nicely composed. I appreciate. Blessings
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John Oldham
Date: 3/10/2023 3:29:00 PM
Thanks, Anisha. Glad you liked it. Keep the muse going! - John
Date: 3/9/2023 8:41:00 AM
I love it, John. truly a poet's poem:) I write about my muse a lot. You should read my poem Inspired Muses, you will like it:)
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John Oldham
Date: 3/9/2023 5:14:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it, Daniel! I do write a lot about the source of my poetry. Sometimes they create themselves, all I do is shepherd 'em through. I liked your "Inspired Muses" too. Kindred spirits, we two! Best, - John

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