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Together We Are Strong

How time has flown, vaporized, thrust us to the twilight of our life Looking back we’ve pursued divergent paths and viewpoints Years of toiling accrued debilitating arthritis in your aching joints Abusing your weary bones, no concern of future or even afterlife How sudden our journey can take a turn that no one can foresee Yet our paths forever intertwine for in our veins flows brethren blood Stumbling blocks and hardships taking you at times through the mud Turn fragile life to shambles and bring without warning a catastrophe Investing naught but good deeds through a lifetime with a heart that’s pure Generous to a fault, target for exploitation, magnet to many a false friend One disappointment after another in spite of you being many’s godsend No pension slush fund, and now a major stroke, but with me please feel secure I always loved to sing the phrase ‘you’re not heavy you’re my brother', Don’t give in to despair, together we can be strong like no other. AP: 3rd place 2022 Submitted on March 13, 2018 for contest TOGETHER WE ARE STRONG sponsored by SILENT ONE - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 4/15/2018 7:57:00 PM
Oh my, this seems so personal and as Eve says down here, meaningful. AS I recall, I did not do this topic nearly the justice that you did, LIne. First place was well deserved. Congratulations on this one.
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Date: 4/15/2018 9:10:00 PM
The inspiration was actually a combo of my husband's brother and my own brother. It works out rather well. Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 3/26/2018 2:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Line ,great meaningful verse .. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/26/2018 2:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/24/2018 9:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-written poem. Great words of wisdom here.
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Date: 3/24/2018 9:15:00 PM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Susan.
Date: 3/23/2018 1:03:00 AM
Congratulations, Line on your win. Such a beautiful poem.
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Date: 3/23/2018 8:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, Subimal. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/23/2018 12:55:00 AM
Congratulations Line on your win. Tom.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/23/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/22/2018 4:04:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/22/2018 9:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sunshine. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/22/2018 4:00:00 PM
A fantastic deep and emotive poem, one of your best poems in my opinion Line.. Congratulation on your first place, we should all be there for one another, so we can all be strong..
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2018 9:42:00 PM
Thank you so much for a wonderful contest, SO. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/13/2018 10:35:00 PM
In our veins flow brethren blood. yes, and when do we realize that? When we experience a catastrophe. Well written, and sagely wise. Good luck in the contest, Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/14/2018 9:58:00 AM
Thank you so much for your warm visit and comment. Well appreciated, Caren.
Date: 3/13/2018 6:16:00 PM
Line: No one has too many friends like you. Thanks for sharing this moving story with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck
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Date: 3/13/2018 6:41:00 PM
Thank you so much for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 3/13/2018 2:17:00 PM
- You describe pain and love beautiful, Line :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/13/2018 2:19:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/13/2018 2:09:00 PM
Oh, Line, your lovely Sonnet is so sad, but so beautifully expressed in this very emotional poem. Your words so tugged at my heart. My own brother is out of the woods now but was quite sick for a while...so I can relate. Best wishes for the contest, but I believe SO will love this. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/13/2018 2:19:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Sandra. Most appreciated.

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