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Today -

Moments mingled and merged,

into a messy masterpiece

 

 

Aware -

Pastel thoughts and patience,

were pieced together with prayers

 

 

. . Creating hours of calm . .

 

 

Tomorrow -

Tenderness will tangle around time,

teaching me to appreciate today

 

 

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                       ~ Thoughts from the heart ~

A feeling of contentment, even when moments are messy

                     Caressing the blessings around me

_______________ (PoetrySoup Format) _______________ Today - Moments mingled and merged, into a messy masterpiece Aware - Pastel thoughts and patience, were pieced together with prayers . . Creating hours of calm . . Tomorrow - Tenderness will tangle around time, teaching me to appreciate today -------------------------------------- ~ Thoughts from the heart ~ A feeling of contentment, even when moments are messy Caressing the blessings around me

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Date: 5/19/2024 5:18:00 PM
Even a masterpiece can be messy, many things, blessings, gifts of today. "A feeling of contentment, even when moments are messy" I love this line especially, I feel it too. Beautiful sentiments and alliteration! xhugsx
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/19/2024 6:39:00 PM
Dear Anaya, it's so wonderful that you're able to feel each moment and emotion within. You truly understand this feeling of contentment. Blessings surround you too. Thank you for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/16/2024 8:31:00 PM
You are so adept in alliterative verse, dear Brandy! This is a lovely piece. Life may be messy. Still if we think of the blessings that surround, we have greater reason to stay content. That's the only way to make life happy. "Pastel thoughts and patience, were pieced together with prayers . . Creating hours of calm . ." Patience and prayers together is a wonderful combination.
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Date: 5/19/2024 6:27:00 PM
Dear Valsa, I'm not exactly sure why, but lately, I've been enjoying this journey with alliteration. Your kind words and compliments leave me in complete awe. While embracing the messy moments of life, there's contentment, indeed. When a heart holds happiness, there's peace. Thank you for sharing your favorite thoughts within. I appreciate you, my sweet friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/16/2024 2:56:00 PM
"Tenderness will tangle around time" Wonderful verse Brandy, hugs
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Date: 5/16/2024 6:42:00 PM
Thank you Joseph, for sharing your favorite thought. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/15/2024 10:08:00 PM
In such a short poem, you certainly know how to use alliteration. I have much to learn. Victor
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Date: 5/16/2024 6:41:00 PM
So kind of you to say, Victor. I appreciate the compliment. You can write one too, my sweet friend. I believe in you. :)
Date: 5/14/2024 2:43:00 PM
Brandy, your expression of your metaphoric themes is just marvelous with wonderful alliteration that fleshes out your oh so original imagery! Your sense of contentment is palpable! If this is for a contest, best wishes, my friend. Blessings of serenity to you!
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Date: 5/14/2024 7:54:00 PM
Dear Sam, thank you for saying my thoughts are expressive and the theme within is marvelous. My heart is content. :) Such a wonderful feeling, indeed. Even though this isn't for a contest, your kind wishes are appreciated. My best to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/13/2024 5:38:00 AM
I love this dear Brandy.. The use of metaphors, such as "moments mingled and merged into a messy masterpiece," paints a vivid picture of life's complexity and the beauty that can be found within it. The imagery of pastel thoughts pieced together with prayers evokes a sense of serenity and mindfulness.
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Date: 5/13/2024 6:36:00 PM
Dear Silent One, you're absolutely right about these metaphors. Moments in life can be messy at times, but there's always beauty hidden somewhere deep within. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. I'm completely content caressing the blessings that surround me. My best to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/11/2024 4:07:00 PM
Your words should be on a Hallmark card- beautiful BEING- <3
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Date: 5/12/2024 5:29:00 PM
Paige, that compliment leaves me in complete awe. My heart is smiling. :) Such a wonderful thing to say, my sweet friend. Thank you so much. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/10/2024 11:37:00 PM
Dear Brandy, this is so delicately beautiful to read from your thoughtful, loving heart and the gorgeous picture accompanies it perfectly. Your unique style always shines with your inner thoughts that you share with us and we are blessed in receiving. I too love, ‘ messy masterpiece’ and ‘pastel thoughts ‘. A contented heart is a happy heart indeed for peace lies in contentment. Acceptance lies in contentment and ‘ living in the moment’ is all we truly have. Dear Bill is so right - you do have
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Date: 5/12/2024 5:26:00 PM
Dear Christina, I'm beyond grateful for all your kind words about me and my poetry. You truly humble me. I wanted to place this photo with my thoughts, because it touched my heart in many ways. So true that a happy heart is filled with contentment. So wonderful, indeed. Thank you for saying my style is unique and it shines. That compliment means so much to me. I appreciate you sharing your favorite thoughts within, and for saying my voice is sweet. I appreciate you, my dear friend. Many wonderful blessings to you as well. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 5/10/2024 11:39:00 PM
such a soft and sweet voice that is truly appreciated. Loved reading this from your heartfelt pen. Have a wonderful weekend with many blessings caressing you. Hugs to you xx
Date: 5/10/2024 2:43:00 AM
Today always seems like a messy masterpiece but your thoughts and words put everything in a proper perspective. My best to you sweet Brandy. Hugs, John
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Date: 5/10/2024 8:53:00 PM
Thank you John, for saying that my thoughts and words place ' everything in a proper perspective. ' Such a wonderful compliment. I appreciate you, my sweet friend. My best to you, always. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/9/2024 6:49:00 PM
Lovely, gentle and comforting poetry, Brandy. Thank for your soft and sweet voice here at Poetry Soup. It's always a pleasure to read your thoughts as you share them with us through your meaningful poetry. Love and Light and lots of hugs my dear friend. Bill
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Date: 5/10/2024 8:47:00 PM
Dear Bill, so kind of you to say my voice is soft and sweet and my poetry is comforting; along with gentle. I'm just a simple woman that writes from the heart. Thank you so much for your lovely comment, my dear friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs to you as well. :) Brandy
Date: 5/9/2024 2:57:00 PM
exquisite, Brandy! I felt introspection and gratitude in your words. I especially liked 'caressing the blessings around me.' I thought those were beautiful. Have a splendid evening, hugs Sara
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Date: 5/10/2024 8:21:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. In life, moments are mangled and messy. Finding those blessings within, is key to being content. So kind of you to share your favorite thought within. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/9/2024 2:31:00 PM
Hi Brandy. I've been a bit concerned about you of late but figured you were just busy. This poem tells me there is calm amidst chaos. Life is complicated. I'm glad you've found a measure of contentment. I'm your faraway advocate. Always
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Date: 5/10/2024 8:08:00 PM
Hi Tommy. You're right, moments have been busy in my world. Your concern lets me know you care. Thank you for being here, for being you. Yes, beyond the business, moments of calm are found. My heart smiles knowing this truth. Just so you know, you'll always be my faraway friend. :)
Date: 5/9/2024 11:01:00 AM
Today is a present....lovely piece , BL.
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Date: 5/10/2024 8:03:00 PM
You're exactly right, Arlo. Thank you for your kind words. :)
Date: 5/9/2024 8:59:00 AM
Dear Brandy, What a nice serene reflection on the beauty found in life's chaotic yet meaningful moments. I loved how you took each word and delicately pieced it together, forming a wonderful mix of introspection and gratitude. Your ability to capture the essence of mindfulness and appreciation is truly inspiring. We need to cherish each passing moment. It is an amazing, heartfelt piece of artistry. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
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Date: 5/10/2024 8:00:00 PM
Dear Daniel, your thoughts are always so beautiful and expressive. Your mind is open to all possibilities placed within. We should ' cherish each passing moment.' I completely agree. Thank you for all your kind words and compliments, my dear friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/9/2024 5:02:00 AM
A hear the alluring sound of alliteration, my dear friend---you delivered your thoughts brilliantly, Brandy. Mindful it is to live in--- and appreciate the now. Feeling of contentment propagates life with joy. Powerful message --succinctly executed.
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Date: 5/10/2024 7:54:00 PM
Dear Vijay, alliteration and aligning each word is my path lately. 'Appreciating the now. ' So true, my dear friend. Each moment given is a gift, indeed. Understanding some moments are messy. Thank you for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 5/8/2024 7:21:00 PM
Enjoyed, Brandy! Time, indeed does look back and perspective is different. Prayers answered.
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Date: 5/9/2024 8:13:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. You're right about looking back and seeing things in a different way. So wonderful indeed, that prayers are answered. Your kind words bring a smile to my heart. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

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