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To My Dad - the Greatest Man I Ever Knew

it’s been three months since i’ve lost you- i remember all the good times we’ve been through. in my final breath i shall exclaim to mankind, that you were the greatest man i ever knew- patient and generous, with a smile so kind, with those baby blue eyes that always shined. you taught me about life and sobriety, though you were fine without notoriety- without you my yellow has turned to blue, my days are hollow filled with anxiety; simple and a gentleman with a heart true, for you were the greatest man i ever knew tragedy has stricken once more for me, when will the tides meet the soft sea? you loved golf and always shot par, a hole in one you earned at age twenty-three! in heaven with Karen, you now are, together in harmony, no longer afar. i made my peace with you on your deathbed, though not sure if you heard what i said- never angry with temper, nor ever rude, you never followed others, only led. i made sure you knew i was full of gratitude, and how your sense of humor lightened my mood. i said, “dad, please know i love you so, and your legacy in my heart, i shan’t let go- i promise to live life from your point of view, and hold Ella Rose when she misses you so- in my final breath i shall exclaim to you… you were the greatest man I ever knew... and thank you for raising me to be just like you.” ______________________________________ To my adoring father, Frank Cernak III who passed away from a rare disease at the end of March of this year. It was sudden and tragic, but I made sure his funeral was perfectly beautiful. We celebrated his legacy of being sober for 35 years. I am so proud of him- there are no words. like I said above...thank you for raising me to be just like you dad... love, your baby girl, Laura Marie

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Date: 11/1/2021 2:03:00 AM
Your love for your dad is beyond amazing, Laura, and touching too, may the Lord give you the much needed comfort:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/19/2022 8:35:00 AM
thank you sweet jo :) -luloo
Date: 7/3/2021 10:17:00 PM
An amazing man well praised and a loving daughter raised well, welcome once again my friend, Aloha!
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/4/2021 8:57:00 AM
aloha to you too! thank you :)-luloo
Date: 7/3/2021 9:45:00 PM
Nice write on touching tribute. Glad to see you back.
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/4/2021 8:57:00 AM
thank you dear Subimal, appreciate it :)-luloo
Date: 7/3/2021 2:50:00 PM
true emotions laid bare in a poem filled with passionate honesty, sad, yet joy that your road through life is now before you in its clarity....glad to see you posting again, you and your poetry have been missed, dear poet
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/3/2021 4:37:00 PM
many thanks sweet Frederic, you are one of the best here :)-luloo
Date: 7/3/2021 1:07:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to your father Lu Loo, im sorry for your loss, but he lives on in your heart and mind and the cherished memories that you have. Tom
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/3/2021 4:37:00 PM
thank you dear Tom, appreciate it :)-luloo

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