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"A heart is not judged by how much you love; but by how much you are loved by others." - Frank L. Baum

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A Jinjagoliath poem:
26th June 2023
POTD 28.6.23
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My work is identity The axe in my hand No blisters to bother me As for years I just stand The weeds and the flowers Call me back down to earth The brown rust confuses Destroys my self-worth The tears and the rain Have frozen me here It could be forever At least that is my fear But then I hear singing And love with a twirl There's something of beauty This dog and this girl She stops to acknowledge Where my work is so stale I am rescued completely My Dorothy Gale We converse, no lips moving I creak and I groan She talks of a journey To get herself home I determine to help her As she's helping me We walk and we talk It feels good to be free It's strange but I know that She strives for the best I feel something beating Once again in my chest Not sure where we're going When this journey will end But I feel like I love her This newly found friend

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Gary Radice

Date: 7/1/2023 9:38:00 PM

A poem with so much heart Christopher. Great cadence and excellent theming.Cheers - Gary

Christopher Grieves
Date: 7/1/2023 10:29:00 PM

Gary.. that means a lot! Thank you :)

Valsa George

Date: 7/1/2023 7:33:00 AM

When love sprouts in a heart, life alltogether takes a new turn. We needn't fear where the journey takes. But, be assured, it will somehow turn to be pleasant. Congratulations Christopher on your POTD

Christopher Grieves
Date: 7/1/2023 9:02:00 AM

That is true wisdom Valsa. We all have the capacity to love, when the right person comes along! Thank you x

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 6/30/2023 11:12:00 PM

A lovely poem. Well done. Wizard of oz was such a good film. The film called 'Judy' was such a sad film about Judy Garlands life.It was such a shame.

Christopher Grieves
Date: 7/1/2023 7:02:00 AM

She was a talent for sure :)

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/28/2023 8:42:00 PM

I am honored to have read your rendition of the most cinematic and wonderful stories ever! The audio, [your voice] enhanced the pleasure. Congratulations Christopher Grieves on POTD! ~I Am Anaya

Christopher Grieves
Date: 6/28/2023 9:35:00 PM

Thank you Anaya! Glad you found the audio too. Lovely comments, very humbled x

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/28/2023 7:34:00 PM

"This newly found friend, Dorothy Gale." I believe she's everyone's friend. :) You've brought this movie to the poetic side, and you've done so; in such a creative way. Congratulations Christopher, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Christopher Grieves
Date: 6/28/2023 9:27:00 PM

The storytelling success is that we can all relate to a character in some way. Thanks Brandy! Hugs :)

Michael Tor

Date: 6/28/2023 7:20:00 PM

Love your theme Christopher very creative and worthy of POTD. Congratulations...

Christopher Grieves
Date: 7/9/2023 11:50:00 AM

Thanks Michael! Really appreciate your support:)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 6/28/2023 2:05:00 PM

Great rhyming and I like the scarecrow metaphor and reference--Wizard of Oz is one of my favorite movies. I suspect we've all been tin men or women at some point in our lives, rusty and groaning...yet love removes the rust setting us free. Congrats on POTD Sara Etgen-Baker

Christopher Grieves
Date: 6/28/2023 2:12:00 PM

Appreciated Sara :-))

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/28/2023 1:53:00 PM

Chris, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD!

Christopher Grieves
Date: 7/2/2023 3:09:00 PM

Tania I appreciate that, thanks x

Jim Slaughter

Date: 6/28/2023 11:17:00 AM

One of my all-time favorite movies, Christopher. I try to watch it at least every couple of years. I was fortunate...way back in my acting days...to get to play the part of the Scarecrow in a production of "Wizard of Oz". It was a hoot-'n-a-half.

Christopher Grieves
Date: 6/28/2023 11:24:00 AM

That's a fascinating fact, Jim. Have been scarecrow myself in years gone by.. not on a yellow brick road though. Thanks :))

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/28/2023 10:54:00 AM

I love this! When at a standstill, just to get moving can be exhilarating!

Christopher Grieves
Date: 6/28/2023 11:06:00 AM

Very true, Kim.

R J. Elless

Date: 6/28/2023 10:10:00 AM

Fine poetry. All in rhyming quatrains, admirable. Congrats on Your POTD. Keep Rolling.

Christopher Grieves
Date: 6/28/2023 10:47:00 AM

Thanks R.J.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/28/2023 10:08:00 AM

Christopher, what a delightful homage to the Tin Man, Dorothy and the magic of Oz! Love that the poem comes from the Tin Man's heart! Congratulations on your very creative POTD. So unique! Blessings of yellow brick roads to you wherever they lead you.

Christopher Grieves
Date: 6/28/2023 10:17:00 AM

Sam, these are wonderful words. Many thanks!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/28/2023 9:07:00 AM

Congrats on POTD, Christopher. Oh, please congratulate Dorothy too! And not to forget -- Toto, too! Joy and Light, Gershon

Christopher Grieves
Date: 6/28/2023 9:25:00 AM

Thanks for your kind words Gershon :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/28/2023 8:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely write/story. Have a blessed day writing away............

Christopher Grieves
Date: 6/28/2023 8:35:00 AM

Thank you Paula - that is lovely of you :-))

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 6/28/2023 6:36:00 AM

A fun, melodic side-view of a great movie Christopher. Congratulations on POTD! :)

Christopher Grieves
Date: 6/28/2023 7:43:00 AM

Linda - everyone has been so kind, yourself included. Thank you. May your own journey over the rainbow be a magical one too :)

Bill Baker

Date: 6/28/2023 5:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD honor, Chris! Well done. Nice rhyming and enjoyable retelling of a joyful story from the Tin Man's viewpoint. Very creative poetry. Write On! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Christopher Grieves
Date: 6/28/2023 5:22:00 AM

Bill great to hear from you from across the pond! You are very kind with your comments, so no axe to grind from me ;) Stay well and thank you.

John Lawless

Date: 6/28/2023 4:31:00 AM

The Wicked Witch ain't gonna like this Chris....beware the flying monkeys. Nicely done..I look forward (hopefully) to a continuing series on the Scarecrow, Lion, and....the very confused Wizard

Christopher Grieves
Date: 6/28/2023 4:42:00 AM

I had considered that John.. I do have a fascination with the story (and the film) and have since childhood.. I think the scarecrow was my favourite - close call though. Toto got a raw deal I thought. Bless you for your encouragement!!

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/28/2023 4:18:00 AM

Excellent and most deserving POTD Chris, so much more going on here than just a metaphorical Dorothy and the tin man, I can see real life being restored after perhaps a deeply troubling period, congratulations cheers, David

Christopher Grieves
Date: 6/28/2023 4:23:00 AM

Perceptive in it's ambiguousness, David. Of course the original Frank L Baum story and imagery does all of the real work for me.. but I am glad it is not too obvious leaving space for the reader to enter in. Thanks David, appreciated :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/28/2023 4:06:00 AM

Your beautiful verses exude vitality and inspiration. This exquisite poem, Chris, was a delight from beginning to end. I offer my sincerest felicitations on achieving the distinguished honor of POTD.

Christopher Grieves
Date: 6/28/2023 4:14:00 AM

Sotto - that is heart-warming for me, truly. You are clearly a gifted encourager of people - no empty space in your chest, clearly. Thank you. Thank you :)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/28/2023 2:48:00 AM

An absolutely lovely poem, Chris ~ enjoyed from start to finish ~ warmest congratulations on POTD

Christopher Grieves
Date: 6/28/2023 2:59:00 AM

That is very generous of you, many thanks! Your comments are a real encouragement :)

William Darnell Sr.

Date: 6/28/2023 2:22:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD, Christopher. Sounds like Ms. Dorthy Gale has found herself a companion. Loved reading this delightful poem, thank you for sharing, and again, congratulations, Christopher! Have a Great Day! Best Wishes, William

Christopher Grieves
Date: 6/28/2023 2:51:00 AM

William - fantastic to hear from you. Thanks for taking the time.. I agree. A beautiful friendship has deep roots in kindness, love and mutual respect. May we all count those blessings when they come our way :) it's a story arc I love

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/28/2023 2:01:00 AM

Would that be the Tin man who stands in Walsall? Love the poem Christopher, enjoyed the read. Congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the day… Belle

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/28/2023 7:29:00 AM

Yes I was referring to the Brownhills Miner. Belle

Christopher Grieves
Date: 6/28/2023 2:54:00 AM

Is that the 'Jigger' or the Brownhills Miner you refer to?

Christopher Grieves
Date: 6/28/2023 2:14:00 AM

Thank you so much Belle x I think this may be for Tin Men everywhere! May your heels never stop clicking :)